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| DarkLightningEnvy 2005-12-14 ch 1,  | abuseThis was truly good. Yes, I am an official Jadis obsessor as well (example: my two stories, Weaker Points, and Rise of the Witch). Don't be ashamed of it! This captured movie Jadis really well, and in ways book Jadis. I love it. -DarkLightningEnvy- -Jess- |
| ruth 2005-12-13 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is great. I always felt that Jadis is one of the deepest character in the whole series. Plus, misunderstood as well, is what I think. |
| jasonc65 2005-12-12 ch 1, | abuseDreadful, horrific, and never-ending. In every world, the White Witch cannot see her salvation and is beyond repentance. Makes me wonder, was there ever a world in which the woman did not say the Word and destroy everything and end up with a cold heart. |
| Morohtar 2005-12-12 ch 1, | abuseI like this a great deal - the style is very polished and fantastical. There is a real sense of cosmic wonder to it; you make Jadis far more than the allegory for evil she is usually seen as, and make her a counterpart to Aslan - a supposal of Satan as Aslan is a supposal of Christ. The one suggestion I would make is that the parenthesised sections detract from the sense of cosmology which the work appears to support: I'd advise you trying to find some way of presenting these sections differently. But, other than that, it is superb. |