I can proudly say to you that this is one of the best stories I have ever read, and it was what prompted me to start writing on this site.

lol, in my mind:

"No? No?! NO?! YOU BASTARD, I SPENT THE WHOLE TIME THINKING OF YOU AND YOU SAY NO!!??!?! GODDAMNIT, I FREAKIN WENT THROUGH HELL AND THEN YOU RESCUE ME AND SAY NO! RAWR!"

Dunno, that was my reaction.

And now, I die of laughter from the mental picture in my mind.

Okay, I know this story is over but there are things that just bug me and I have to let them out.

Kakuro becomes a protective and loving brother to Gaara after his Heel Face Turn in both the manga and anime, why do you think he freaked so much when Gaara was kidnapped? He was freakin' poisoned because he was trying to save him.

Temari is a good sister, too. She was even so-so before he changed for the better. And you make her seem like a scaredy cat. She doesn't stutter. I don't really recall a time where she stuttered.

I like your character, though! She's cool... And I like the whole going with the book thing! I have a story like that, except in a roundabout way it's horror and she's trapped in the destiny the books giving her, trying to escape but having to protect it because if she didn't she'd be sucked in. ^-^

...'Bout your character, again. You are seriously close to making me cry. And beat the shit out of her father. I really will. I'll make a fanfic account just to write a story about torturing him and sending him to hell.

Gaara's the sandman! ^-^ Don't ask why but I find that rather amusing. He danced with her, too! That was cute!

And he deserves a freakin' hug. I was on youtube, saw a vid, was curious, clicked it, and cried my eyes out 'cuz it was Gaara's childhood. Stupid Yashamaru. I shall kill him again. ><

I think I shall continue reading now. Sorry, but I'm bothered by Kankuro's fear of Gaara. I was rather proud of how his character developed in Part 2. I like character development! ^-^

Great GaaraOC story! I rarely see any good stories out there with OCs! I'll be off to read the sequel now!

Does gaara have shukaku still? I'm curious.

omgomgomg. they kissed... lol. they actually asked them to. aw... (starts ranting about how adorable that was)

Wow. She killed him. Man that chappie was so dramatic. XD

THAT was sweet!! (start applauding)

The mizukage next please?

Aw... so kawaii...

(cries) that was so sad and so happy at the same time. (sigh) my emothions are messed up.

Bakabakabakabaka damnit gaara (starts cursing)

(cries) poor olha

Stupid @##$$%...(mutters a few curses at her father)

Well now Gaara can kill them. (evil gleam in eye)