Whoa... awesome fic. I can't believe I never found this on rakhal's ranma archive or anywhere else before...

I definitely like how you paired Nabiki and Ranma together in the end, though I was sort of expecting something to happen between Lime and Monlon, though I guess that was not essential to the story...

I also found ti amusing how you had nabiki at odds with the wannabe Yakuza, seeing that in the manga, her canon-self could have fit perfectly in that culture.

Anyway: I rather enjoyed this fic-will there be any sort of sequel to show what happens next, for example when Kasumi regains her memory and realizes that Nabiki is now more than friends with Ranma?

Very impressive epic, I enjoyed every page. I'm glad I started reading this after it was complete, some of those cliff hangers were nasty :)

Well done

R7

Huh... To be honest, I enjoyed the story very much. I think you have quite the gift to become a good writer. In fact, I must say the only thing I found disappointing about this is the fact that it's fanfiction. Now I'm here, reading. I have no problem with fanfiction. I would just like to point out, that this would be quite a stand alone story. Now there is nothing wrong with fanfiction, it's fun and can bring life to stories thought long dead. Yet I think you would make quite an author if you decided to one day write and publish one of your own works. You have a talent for character development. As many may have noticed, the Ranma characters were static characters. Yet you added change into the mix, enough that made them seem more human in a way. I guess it kind of allowed a connection to be made between the reader and the characters in a story. I wasn't just watching a scene unfold anymore, I was part of the story, with them for the ride. With Nabiki on that journey to find what she lost. Hanging there on every moment, with her as I too tried to understand how Ranma did what he did. Along for the ride and the journey as I can best put it. You have a gift. An ability to take and idea and make a compelling story full of discovery and emotion out of it. I look forward to seeing what else you may do, and if you ever do publish something. I'd definitely have to take a look at it.

a sequel? Yay! Glad you add this chapter instead of stopin

I am left with a depressing and empty feeling in my chest now...

The story was so good that as I read other fanfics I am trying to see if I can feel even a fraction of what I felt while reading this one, of which left me with unsatisfying results.

o_o

Must cry in a corner now as I've felt I've read to the point where I can no longer read. I loved how everything just seemed to be put together in the end, and how questions all seemed to be answered.

Being a Nabiki/Ranma pairing fan this was a nice sotry, even tho ugh mid way I was tempted to say it could have easily been Lime instead, well anyways I'm just repeating myself and going in circles now...

A really good fic, for those Nabiki fans out there and anyone into a good fanfic read, definitely check this out!

If i could gush that would be what i would be doing right now, gushing.

Very good fic.

Wow... is all I can say.

For those that read reviews before reading fanfics; you just have to read this one. It's THAT good.

Somethings were off like the power difference and such but those were cleared up, also... wow, was by far the most entertaining read I've had this month in the Ranma section of fics.

Finished it in one day cuz the pages practically turned themselves. Excellently written!

Good story! I can't wait for a little sequel to pp up and cleanse everything in the air air that screamed, 'sequel!'. Good job and keep up the good work!

Cute. Nice story. Good job. )

Hmm, that wrapped things up nicely. I really enjoyed seeing how life has become for everyone and how things might have been if Ranma was not around, though Kuno might be another story... Anyways, I look forward to reading some of things your are currently working on.

Oh. My. God! Freaking awesome story! I loved this! You had me kept in suspense at the edge of my seat at times, laughing, intrigued. I love the plot and the way you developed Nabiki's character. I love it! Oh my God I just don't know how to express it any better. If I had to rate this story on a scale of 1 to 10 with 10 being the best this would be an 11! Thank you for writing!

This reminds of the twilight zone. I think I'll read the rest of it.

bravo!

personally i'd love to see where they go from here. You did great on this. had me holding on the entire time.

Great chapter, and great story. I been eagerly awaiting this final chapter and I was not dissapointed. Well written! I will DEFINATELY read the sequel, whenever it is written ... no pressure!

Good luck teaching! Have a Happy, and safe, Holiday season!

Good read