Reviews for Evangelion: A Fool's War

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Necrokon 2006-08-06 ch 12,	abuseYou know what your story needs; very romantic moments between Shinji and Asuka. I find it a little dry. What I mean by that is that nothing is actually like in the series. I mean you made Asuka a ** hazard for god's sake. She should have moved in with Misato and Shinji. Also, after Shinji made Unit 1 go berserk, you should have had the Dummy Plug rejected by Yui Ikari. I look forward to your next chapter unless it doesn't meet the requirements above.
Hidari 2006-07-22 ch 12,	abuseEheh? They're not going to be living together? Still, interesting decision. It seems the plot is thickening too. Can't wait for an update! ^_^
Frost-EVA-04 2006-07-21 ch 12,	abuseOuch... Shinji and Asuka aren't going to be living together? Not cool. Wonder what's going to happen. Please let Shinji and Asuka fight together still. Keep it up. Frost out.
Forever Rahhel 2006-07-20 ch 12,	abuseI was wondering why someone who calls himself AgentKaji would let Kaji dissapear so fast. Good to see that he will cause some interesting trouble. Wonder what the commanders are suspecting from Asuka. Keep it up.
marduk-report 2006-07-20 ch 12,	abusegood chapter, but i got this chilly feeling that tells me your going to do something nasty to asuka after that conversation between fuyustuki and ikari-please dont do it o_o
jcmoorehead 2006-07-20 ch 12,	abuseInteresting chapter, i'm shocked that you decided to stick Asuka with Kaji but then again it'll make it very different. Keep up the good work.
jcmoorehead 2006-07-03 ch 11,	abuseFinally finished it all, I love it so far. I liked Asukas introduction aswel, she is slightly OOC but it doesnt matter after all it isn't an easy task trying to keep these particular characters in character due to their nature, but you were able to keep the important aspects of her in character to that was good. Cant wait to see what happens next.
jcmoorehead 2006-07-03 ch 6,	abuseGetting very interesting now, and nice way to introduce Kaji. Was interesting to see Hikari slapping Shinji and then later on him getting hit by Touji aswel. Your writing style is very clear and flows perfectly, its easy to read you're doing well with your use of technical terms, can't wait to read the rest.
jcmoorehead 2006-07-03 ch 3,	abuseJust read the first 3 sections of this, I like it so far and i'm looking forward to reading the rest. I'm looking forward to seeing what you've changed especially with Rei and the Dummy Plug system, hopefully i'll find out more in the next few chapters. Good work so far.
Hidari 2006-05-10 ch 11,	abuseTalk about history repeating itself, huh? What's this about Shinji being fired? They can't do that! And just what is Kaji planning to do to Asuka? Okay, so many questions, update soon, k?
Forever Rahhel 2006-05-10 ch 11,	abuseGood to hear about quicker updates. Some more Asuka and Rei will be interesting. I bet the last words of Gendo were 'I am gay.' Keep it up.
Hidari 2006-05-08 ch 10,	abusecheers I like it, I like it! singing I think it's different (and good) that you have Rei and Asuka shake hands and try to be friends. And you did a superb job with the Angel-Eva fight scenes! Great chapter! Looking forward to more. ^_^
Goldamon X 2006-04-23 ch 10,	abuseJust finished reading through this thing. Not a bad story all in all though you may wish to be a little more vague in yer cliff hangers. or maybe its just me. any way i look forward to the next chapter whenever that may come about.
WebKnight 2006-04-22 ch 10,	abuseGood Chapter. I want more, hurry, hurry. So I wonder if there is going to be a rivalry for Shinji's affections too. Only time and the writer will know.
RahXephon 2006-04-22 ch 1,	abuseYour first chapter didn't interest me. Your summary doesn't give a lot of information of what I'm about to expect in your fanfic. So I'm not going to read any further.

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