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| Sara's Just Everday People ... 2007-07-14 ch 28,  | abuseYOUR STORIES ARE AWSOME!WU!WU!YOUR STORIES ARE AWSOME!WOH! |
| Tsukikage-Kiki 2007-01-12 ch 6, | abuseI was kind of hoping that the story would be less Mary-suish, but it still is. Oh well. I can't keep reading right now, and I can't promise I'll ever come back to it. I have other stories to read and my own to write, and I am most sorry. *bows* Your efforts alone make you a most powerful author, and I wish you luck on your journey. (Heheh, I am feeling Omi-ish today) |
| Tsukikage-Kiki 2007-01-12 ch 2, | abuseThe story is interesting, but Lisa is... kind of Mary Suish. Actually, really Mary Suish. She has far too many powers; hundreds? She's also too strong. A good goal for a character is to give them limits, and for them not to be able to defeat the more powerful ACs. The character just isn't interesting if she's invincible, and if the character is uninteresting, then the entire story loses interest. I, however, will continue to read and see if it gets better. Ciao! |
| PotterPhantom7603 2007-01-05 ch 24, | abuseGreat chapter, I always love Showdowns! By the way, DON'T SAVE JACK! I like his character, but he's nothing in comparison to Wuya and Hannibal Bean! MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I'm evil >) |
| PotterPhantom7603 2007-01-05 ch 20, | abuse? Now I'm really confused, more than usual :? |
| PotterPhantom7603 2007-01-05 ch 19, | abuseYay! Actioney and a surprise! It's a dream come true:) |
| PotterPhantom7603 2007-01-05 ch 14, | abuseDo you love torturing them? This is a great story:) |
| PotterPhantom7603 2007-01-05 ch 12, | abuseOH BOY! Rai's gonna get his behind kicked by Lisa! |
| PotterPhantom7603 2007-01-05 ch 11, | abuseAnother un-activated Shen-Gong-Wu? Cool:) |
| PotterPhantom7603 2007-01-05 ch 9, | abuseYay fight scene! I'm rooting for Chase! Go Chase Young! |
| PotterPhantom7603 2007-01-05 ch 8, | abuseNO! IT'S THE SPIDERS! It's so cool that she can use the power of the Reversing Mirror! |
| PotterPhantom7603 2007-01-05 ch 7, | abuseI don't even WANT to know what Rai was thinking! Great story:) |
| PotterPhantom7603 2007-01-05 ch 5, | abuseSeriously, how many villains were trapped in the Yin-Yang world? Great story! |
| PotterPhantom7603 2007-01-04 ch 3, | abuseI'm confused:( Oh well! I always am:) Great story! |
| PotterPhantom7603 2007-01-04 ch 2, | abuseI wish I had her powers! Go Lisa! |