Two words for you. Write more! I'd love to hear about more of Zatanna's adventures.

I can't find any real mention of the Outsider. I checked the Wikipedia article on DC Comics characters, and the only reference to the Outsider says see Alfred Pennyworth.

I like the new chapter. I'll be looking forwerd to mor.

I wouldn't say that I'm necessarily a Manhunter fan, but it seemed out of character. Makes more sense, and this was an interesting chapter.

Nancy Drew? That's... an interesting twist. Unexpected to say the least.

Personally, I'd have gone with: "Sllaw, teem ni eht elddim." ("Walls, meet in the middle.") If the amulet deflects spells, don't aim at him.