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Goddess of LOVE82
2006-03-24
ch 1,
abuseHm, I see possibilities! Vaughly interesting, update soon.
~The Goddess~
beanrox
2006-03-07
ch 1,
abuseSo I am. Sokka and Zuko, toether for even five minutes, and half the world is pretty much destroyed. So...I would be worrying.
Sentra
2005-12-13
ch 1,
abusemay~be it's just my ADD kicking in, but none of that [diologe] made any seance >.< i am so confused... but i will keep reading ^_^
wilderness-writer
2005-12-12
ch 1,
abuseWhat a cool idea for a plot. I like your dialogue, it's paced very well and moves smoothly. Good job.
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