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| Goddess of LOVE82 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abuseHm, I see possibilities! Vaughly interesting, update soon. ~The Goddess~ |
| beanrox 2006-03-07 ch 1, | abuseSo I am. Sokka and Zuko, toether for even five minutes, and half the world is pretty much destroyed. So...I would be worrying. |
| Sentra 2005-12-13 ch 1, | abusemay~be it's just my ADD kicking in, but none of that [diologe] made any seance >.< i am so confused... but i will keep reading ^_^ |
| wilderness-writer 2005-12-12 ch 1, | abuseWhat a cool idea for a plot. I like your dialogue, it's paced very well and moves smoothly. Good job. |