That was one of the best Synlet fanfics I've read yet. I love your writing style and the whole concept of the fanfic was incredible! I just checked in with your fanfic page and KYA! I seen more Synlet fanfics! I love you! Well maybe not love...kinda creepy? Don't ya think?

Anyway I'm off to read some more of your delightful fanfics. Oh and you have motivated me to write my own Synlet fanfic! Well maybe. Truth be told - I don't particuarly like writing fics that are more then one chapter. But hey! I'm one for one-shots. xD

You have been reviewed by an entertained HeartlessBuggy <3

Your site isn't there any longer. Did you manage to post it elsewhere?


-jw`chan ^-^
PS: I adore, "No Longer the Villain."

Try one with Vlad Plasmius!

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this is really good but a bit sad for he looses her at the end!! good job!!

When I started reading this story, I'd decided that I'd read the first three chapters and that would be it, at least for the next couple of days. And now here I am, all the way at the end of chapter 10.

All I have to say is, excellent work. All of the characterizations seemed completely believable, the suspense and drama were real and gripping, and the little bits of humor were very nicely inserted without detracting from the flow of the narrative. There are very few things to criticize about the story, except for the presence of characters who start out with a possible strong contribution to the story but who are essentially "written out" of the action, such as Edna Mode and Mirage. Still, great story!

Wow, awesome story. Yeah, it was a little bumpy, but it was pretty damn good all things considered. I simply cannot wait to read the sequel, but that'll be another night.

Thanks for writing such a great story and your obvious jumpstart of the Synlet fandom.

Lone

I have read further ^^. Yay! I like how you switched calling him Syndrome and Buddy, it was a very nice touch. And finally Violet at least attempts escape. I just thought it was odd that she wouldn't at least try.

I will continue on another night, but once again I have work in the morning. Read some more later.

Lone

I wish I could read further... but I must sadly call this my stopping point for the night. I need to go to work at nine tomorrow and it's 1:30 now. If I want to be awake for the massive father's day rush I need some shut eye.

I like the story but just for some critique I think Syndrome is a little out of character. I think it's fine and it's not so bad that he's completely off the mark, he's just scootching towards a little too nice without enough justification.

I also would think he would think things out a little further... taking his well known prisoner into a gaggle of paparazzi? Someone is going to see her. On Violet's part I find it odd that she hasn't at least tried to get away while she's been walking behind him; couldn't she just turn invisible and hide in a doorway or something?

I'm sorry if this is annoying you but these things have been bugging me and I'm only trying to bring things up for you to think about.

But I can't wait to continue ^^

Lone

This is such an intriguing story. I love it when authors show us that not everyone is evil; in fact almost no one is completely heartless. Does Syndrome even realize that he isn't entirely evil? He's going on about how the "seeds of empathy" are a disadvantage to her when he is clearly letting up for the sake of being humane. I must continue.

Lone

This is new stuff for me now ^^. Wow, this is a pretty good fic so far. I can't wait to find out what happens next, however I must regrettably wait until tomorrow to find out, for I must go to bed so I can function at work tomorrow. I will be back to read more later; I just know it's going to be worth the wait. ^^

Lone

I simply cannot wait to read this. I've been hearing about it ever since I started looking at Crispy-Gyspy's fan art. She's who really got me into this Synlet pairing but not I just can't get enough.

Anyway, I've basically read all of chapter 1 and 2 because of her comic pages for it. However I shall read this one after I've read a couple others that I'm currently in the middle of. If I keep changing fan fictions I'm going to get the plots mixed up, so I shall return at a soon date. TTFN Ta ta for now ^^

Lone

Hmm... So far, it seems to be pretty good. Just a little bit of revision is needed, I think, and really it's not "necessary," just "if you want to make just a little bit better."

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So you're the one who came up with the term Synlet?

Always,
Robert Mason

Random ending! But anyway I can't wait to read the sequel, I hope you complete it soon, I hate to have to wait for more of your awesome story!

Don't worry I've kissed before, so if I ever get around to writing a Synlet fic I will make the best kiss scene ever! Also I need inspiration, so I'll have to look at half a dozen pictures of this couple on Deviantart.