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Reviews For: Dreamaway

juz-a-reviewer 2007-10-18 ch 1,	abuseits so abstract. Something different. its really nice. it reminds me of this book i read for lit. the ending was hanging and i almost burned the book cuz i wanna know the ending. so its Al an Winry getting married?? sorry... my interpretation is screwed...haha
Yuki342 2007-09-28 ch 1,	abusethis was so sweet!!
Reta McClain 2007-01-19 ch 1, anon.	abuseO_o Beautifully written story. Hm... I got the impression that Ed is blind. O_o Is he? Nice story overall.
Hinako 2006-09-04 ch 1, anon.	abuseHmm. I would probably enjoy this a little more (even if its sad) If I actually understood what was going on.. :)
Tokichic 2006-07-05 ch 1,	abusethe first thought that came to my mind after reading this was that it was very surrealistic, like an abstract painting. beautiful yet fainly disturbing in a way you can't quite explain. if i was roy, i'd have grabbed him by the shoulders and said "Good God, snap out of it, man!" ...what did he find out?? O.o it scares me, like something i missed somehow. oh! I know what that feeling reminds me of! when i read a book called '1984' by George Orwell! that's exactly what that's like. that's officialy what this story reminds me of.
EdenandDeon 2006-06-02 ch 1,	abuseIt was creepy. I liked it...but it made me miss the full metal I know too! I 'm with Roy...he's acting not right in the head! Good Story. Deon
agent000 2006-05-13 ch 1,	abuseWow. Weird, but awesome. Full of philosophy, which makes it awesome. One can never have too much philosophy in a story, hehe. Thanks for sharing this.
KamauFox 2006-03-17 ch 1,	abuseBeautiful story, very mysterious. I loved it! The description you used was very nicely done and gave a great mental picture. I added this to my C2 (Which is for stories that include Roy and Ed in a non yaoi relationship.) If you would like it removed please tell me.
Samurai101 2006-02-14 ch 1, anon.	abuseEd is 'wispy' in this story. His head is full of fluff, or fog, I can't decide which. That, or his mind is completely shattered, and the Ed we all know-of hard facts and sceince- found out life was different-wishes, dreams and fantasy-. La. Very nice Nee-sama! Ganbatte!
K a w a i i - S y a o r a n 2005-12-13 ch 1,	abuseOh geez, I know this is a oneshot but it was so mysterious. There was a suspenseful air around it as well as a peaceful one. I could mentally paint of picture of everything. Edward's eyes--loved how much detail you put into describing his eyes. I can just see it! You are so so so good at writing. I absolutely loved this. Despite it being just a oneshot, I wish there was a follow up. Part of me feels as if some thing's missing from it (like some unanswered questions though I'm not sure what lol) and another part of me feels it was just finished perfectly. Ahh.. I could just gush about this for so long. I truely loved it. The atmosphere was so serene. =]
Karasu Hokori 2005-12-13 ch 1,	abuseOh wow, I really liked that! Good job.
Shingo-sama 2005-12-13 ch 1,	abusewow...that's so wow... I'm speachless. Is there going to be a second chapter?
CaptainKase 2005-12-12 ch 1,	abuseWow...I...I...I'm not sure what to say. O.o But, oh my, your writing is lovely. You can never be too detailed, dearest. Trust me. ^__^ About halfway through, I started thinking, "Oh god...please don't let this be yaoi!" AND YOU DIDN'T DISAPPOINT ME! ~gives you cookies~ Because I was thinking...>_> Oh geez it's going to be another lame yaoi where Roy comforts Ed who's depressed about Winry and Al. CLICHE. (XD In case you couldn't tell, I'm not terribly fond of yaoi...by not terribly fond, I mean, I HATE it. ~shudders~ Roy...and Ed...TOGETHER!? HOW DOES THAT MAKE SENSE!? ~ahem~ )But then I read the end...and...and...YAY! Well...anyway.

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