elliot would never talk that way to a rape victim...you might want to consider revamping that part...

Here is your Tiny Morsel of Feed Back! lol _ it was good and all but i wanted to see more action like just put some Raptors in the mix... WAIT I GOT IT! when ever you have the chance you should make a Story on Jurassic Park 3 like about them just being in the mall and then out of nowhere came a T-Rex and they had to run from it while taking raptors out with spinning sidekicks! :D yea!

Well, either way this was a good story and am looking for an update! :)

haha im loving that suspense! lol thats how you keep on selling something! you leave them wanting more! lol so keep that in mind if it isnt already there, for future stories! :D lol

always,

-Luis "Rocks Hard Cuz He Just Got Lv. 30 On Halo 2" Leon

I personally like it! Continue!

loser!

update soon. I liked this chapter.

Wow! I can't wait for more! update soon!

AH a cliffhanger! Thanks. haha. This was a very good chapter - it strengthened some of the info about how Elliot is going to handle Aidan and his job and also brought in the rape case into the story. Is that going to follow the rest of the storyline as well? That would be cool.

And I feel so bad for Aidan in school! AH I hope everything turns out all right for him! This was a very good chapter!

4400 is on right now for once. YAY

Oh my gosh this was GREAT! I really loved the ending with Elliot coming home to find Aidan asleep on the couch - it was so ... I don't know, cozy? Is that the word? I don't know lol but it was nice. I CANNOT wait for more so PLEASE! haha. This was really good, I just wish that it were turned into a real episode !

And about the sending of that file, my gmail just froze and yeah...this is getting nowhere lol I'll search the web for ways to filesend.

"Families" is my favorite ep. Please continue.

interesting... please, continue

update soon. this seems like a good story.

i like it! its got an interesting beginning...update soon!