 Bastet Starwind 7/21/02 . chapter 1Uhh, wow? Kero and Suppi talkin' slang? Yue being almost normal is well, normal. I wouldn't mind another chapter to this, just to get some giggles from it. I like it, a lot |
 Aya Chow 6/29/01 . chapter 1 OMG Catsy I laughed my ASS off! It was so easy to visualize Yue, Kerochan (Cerberus), and Spinel Sun doing and saying everything in the fic (which made it so much more fun). The only problem I had was in getting past the first paragraph as it gave me a feeling of heavy-handedness not seen anywhere else. Phrases such as "terminated its arc" and "toppled over the threshold" hold up the rhythm of the story it seems. Perhaps reword? Somehow, paragraph 1 just doesn't quite gel with the flow of your story. However, even if you think me daft for the suggestion, my compliments for a fun fic. Not many can use words like "elucidated" to effectively enhance a mood and you are one of the few. :) |
 Anna 6/21/01 . chapter 1 Hi Catsy-san,
XDXDXD you had me laughing my head off with this I'm studying Al Capone in history right now, and this just reminds me of it... the accents in their dialogue is so funny!
Oh, and write more onegai. It's great to read a good fic after reading some _horrible_ ones here...
-Anna-chan |
 Taikonderoga 5/5/01 . chapter 1This is really funny and I like Kero's gangster accent! Very cute! ) |
 Violintide 5/2/01 . chapter 1Interesting.. very.. interesting. :P Yet somehow, I enjoyed it. _- |
 Sakura1301 5/1/01 . chapter 1That was funny how they said "Mistah" Instead of mister. Good one. |
 Wyrm 4/30/01 . chapter 1Weirer than hell, but really funny. If you have any more "CCS bunnies", please put them
up! |
 Yume 4/30/01 . chapter 1sugoii that's great! you have a talent for this. luv the part with Yue's line .;; |
 Amer 4/30/01 . chapter 1*laughs hysterically* Oh my, that was quite amazing XD XD |
 Silverlight 4/30/01 . chapter 1That was DAMNED funny. *snickers*...silverlight |
 Aeslinn 4/30/01 . chapter 1LOL! I loved it! I wish you had added a few more people in there, tho. Maybe Meilin..*shivers* oooh, that would have been a good fight! )
Arigato for a good read! |