I wish it weren't over :( But there's a reason there's twelve days of Christmas, and you throwing in one more to make a baker's dozen was a blessing. :D This was a great job, really. I loved reading it. :D :D :D

And now on to your ShinichixRan story! :D

Okay, that was cute. (: And what Heiji said...he probably would say something like that xD

xDDDD

You're so funny. 3

Definite fave

I giggled and "awwwwww"'d all the way through this. Great job (:

I know this was posted like...six years ago, but glad to hear your teeth are feeling better :D

This reminds me of a quote I once read. "In a world of black and white, he is my color."

You never cease entertaining me.

This was so sweet. (:

That's one amazing jewelry store clerk. :O

Also, this is freaking perfect.

For this couple especially.

You've got such a way with words

I love your style.

Ha, that was cute. xD

Seems Heiji has a few running gags on that show.

1. He seems to get hurt quite a lot and just NOT CARE.

2. He eats like he's never seen food before and he must have MOAAARRRR

3. His obliviousness to Kazuha's feelings for him.

He's a darn good character to work with. :D

I love these (:

...and btw, my username isn't the product of my egotism, it's my nickname. Because my name's Athena. xD

When you mentioned fireblazie in the comments, I thought "wait...that sounds familiar..."

And then I realized that I had just spent the better part of this afternoon obsessed with HER stories. And that she had mentioned you.

You're a very good writer, also. (: I love this pairing.

Hahaha..Applesauce! That's hilarious!

Those chapters were great. The characterization was exactly right as well. I had some really good laughs too. I especially loved 11 with grandma. I did not expect that at all.

I. Love. This. Story. To. Bits.

...YAH!

Had to get that out of my system! This was so good! Heiji is such an idiot but so funny!

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BRAVO! best one yet. The only first-kiss-Kazuha-Heiji-scene that was done right and totally in character. Love how you did it in his POV, and how you worked up to that part. great, great job.