All hail this genius. Seriously, I need some more of these. It's a long wait until 2010 when Slayers Revolution is released in the U.S. These are a terrific pick-me-up until then! Continue please!

Very nice indeed.

I really liked the dam analogy. It's cliche, to be sure, but it fits really well. *chuckles*

That was cute! Thanks for updating!

Argh! Why can't I write the romance-y stuff like you can!?

Nice job!

Omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg! This was the best collection of stories I have read to date of all the different ransoms I have read! I really really can't wait for more!

Cutest story EVER! Love it! Keep the good work and continue please!

Hi! I love your story here! Normally I dont like to read short stories, but I'm glad I started this one! Very cute!

In the interests of constructive criticsm: my family actually raises ducks and chickens. It can take literally *hours* for them to finally hatch out, and when they do they are wet and too tired to move much. Still, it was an adorable use in this chapter, which I quite enjoyed anyway. Good job!

with this chapter you made me wanna read the novels even more ^^ awesome job like always!!

Zel's line at the end was seriously the best thing ever. :D

Sight... a sweet one, thanks for writing it!

lol

Yay! A new addition! =D Poor Lina; she's not as selfish as she'd like to be.

Nice job as always.

Very sweet. ^^ It reminds me a bit of the post-Shabranigdo battle, but it's also a good separate piece. You can't really beat the bedside vigil, can you? ~.^ Besides that, I liked Lina's thoughts that you added, like her realizing how high Gourry is on her list of priorities (very high, naturally!).