That was really good! As expected from any work of yours... it tied all the little ends up nicely :) Well done :D

blizzy

Great new character, the conflicting personalities of Onigumo and Osamu was so believable. Very original idea. Awesome job.

InfernoEclipse

Now that ... was creepy.

chilling. This really could have happened in the series. Aesome job!

You have written a very interesting take on the origins of Onigumo and Naraku. Good Job!

Caitriona

Loved this the first time I read it, and then again on the second time. It's delightfully dark and original. Great work.