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| Kiterie 2007-09-28 ch 1, | abusecute! |
| YourAngelStandingBy 2007-06-15 ch 1, | abuseI really liked this. That's really all I can say. -Angel |
| black-lightning82 2007-06-14 ch 1, | abuseHm. This is a cool story. It really makes you think, you know? It makes you think about everything. Well, It was really well written and I love the originality. You did a great job. |
| Ash of Mine 2007-03-27 ch 1, | abuseAmazing one-shot! And really thoughtful... Great job with Obito's voice ^o^ I love the framing of the story: 'For someone who’s supposed to be a genius, Kakashi can be a real idiot sometimes.' but 'he may be an idiot, but he’s kind of a genius too.' Kakashi is aw but Obito is greater ;p Thank you for sharing! |
| RandomTopic 2006-12-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was good. I liked how Obito said he had forgotten about a lot of stuff from his life. It really makes you think. |
| Mariagoner 2006-08-25 ch 1, | abuseThis story kinda made me tear up inside. God, I love Obito! |
| WittyWriter 2006-05-14 ch 1, | abuseWow, that has to be one of the best things i've ever read. I loved Obito's ghost speaking, just a great point of view. It's was serious and funny too, you just made it work well. |
| wyldcat 2006-03-24 ch 1, | abuseI like! *adds to favs* |
| HarkTisLark 2006-03-15 ch 1, | abuseI love the effortless, almost-irrelevent flow of this piece. It's an insightful character study (not just of Kakashi, but of Obito, too). |
| Hyuga Dragon 2006-03-12 ch 1, | abuseI like this. Obito is one of my favs, so its good to hear a story from his POV. Overall this story was great, though I didn't really get the part about Iruka. Is Kakashi gay or something? But anyways, I liked the story. |
| Adali 2006-01-25 ch 1, | abuseThis is great. It's well written, and I really like how you get a mix of Kakashi and Obito, so that they're seperate, but you see the effect Obito's had on Kakashi. Awsome work! |
| Innogen VorwandKlugheit 2005-12-20 ch 1, | abuse*tears of joy* good very good no WICKED u ROCK . |
| Uozumi 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuseThis was an interesting fic especially the point of view and language. Very nice. ~ Uozumi |
| M-python-girl 2005-12-17 ch 1, | abusei like.! |
| Odyssion 2005-12-16 ch 1, | abuseThe sentiment put into this story was incredibly beautiful. A unique idea, writing from the perspective of Obito - the whole concept of Obito listening in while Kakashi talks is rather tragic, but also calming. The syntax in this really suited the topic, and it was a great fic overall. |