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Slyk
2009-08-02 . chapter 5
Hey emy! You've been off this story for a while now...did something happen, or is it 'just' you losing interest? No offence meant.
Hope to read from you soon,
Slyk
cmwinters
2008-04-29 . chapter 5
Z0MG SQUEAL YAY UPDATE!


*BOUNCEBOUNCEBOUNCE*

I had completely given up on hoping for updates to this story!

*DANCESQUEALFLAIL*

(ahem)

(And now, mayhap, I should go actually read the damned chapter, hm? *cough*)

>.>
naash
2008-04-28 . chapter 5
wow emy. that was brilliant. again nice job i love your language and its real haunting as well.

one of the best written fanfic ive read in a long time.

your friend,
nasha
It is written
2007-10-31 . chapter 1
love! update! please?
Slyk
2007-09-01 . chapter 4
It is a good story indeed. I read these four chapters this very morning and found it very well-written.
The characters are deeply described, so even major personality changes as Sanpe's can be easily faced.
The only thing I found really hard to go through was the complex timeline of Memoriae...i got lost more than once...
All of this said, go on this way! You're very good at it.
Paper
2007-09-01 . chapter 1
Whow, that was...whow!
How could you think about such a thing...it was at the same time terribly attracting and horryfing...
You really know how to write, compliments, really...it's a great story...
Gueneviere
2007-07-11 . chapter 4
Brilliant. I'm a little confused about the timeline, but I'm loving the fic.
pstibbons
2007-07-08 . chapter 3
Draco agreeing to be tortured as a fake Hermione? That says a great deal. Bloody original too.
pstibbons
2007-07-08 . chapter 2
Odd confessions of Snape to Harry.
Well written though.
pstibbons
2007-07-08 . chapter 1
Ouch.
tefy
2007-06-30 . chapter 4
hello there
wow it has been a very long time since I last read a chapter of this fic but it was worth it, this was great
hope to read more soon
see ya
take care
cmwinters
2007-06-30 . chapter 4
Oh my. And round and round and round it goes! Draco, god, what a prat!

Hm. You know, you have describe Hermione a couple of times as a half-blood, and she's not. Half-blood is someone with a wizard parent and a Muggle parent, or a wizard parent and a Muggle-born parent. The Death Eaters would refer to her as a MUDBLOOD, which is someone with two MUGGLE parents. Harry, Snape and the Dark Lord are all half-bloods. Lily & Hermione are Muggle-born. At first, I thought you were making her a half-blood for some particular reason, but when you referred to her as both a Mudblood and a half-blood in the same paragraph, I became less convinced of that.
naash
2007-06-30 . chapter 4
hey

it was extremely good. im satisfied right from the dialogs to the detailed scenes and the strong emotions that you tattooed on the characters.

it was perfection truthfully.

update soomn cause im waiting for the next chapter. you left me hanging. you're almost as evila s lord voldemort that way. lol

naash
sbrande
2007-06-30 . chapter 4
Wow! This is great. I love the way you are going from past to present and although it is a little confusing at times, it breaks up the manotamy.

I would love to see this fic finished. How many more chs do you have for us?

Cheers, Sonia :)
naash
2007-01-17 . chapter 3
the plots definitely expanding. seriosu the angst is so good that my breath gets hitched in my throat when i'm reading it. please do continue for you have the talent

naash
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