That was so sweet and cute. Your summery is the best summery I've read on fanfic,so fair.

Lovely Story

Wow, the ending. I just have to favorite this.

Wow... there are no words to describe how wonderful this was to read. You are very good with words. I hope you still write like this. It is very very sweet. :)

Aww... that was so sweet. I loved it. It makes me want to know what happens next. Great work.

aw... i just let out a romantic sigh..that barely happens!

Man, I love LOVE how you wrote this. So much description of each characters actions and emotions, as well as everything going on around them. Dialogue couldn't be better; it's not really fluffly, just really realistic, humorous lightly romantic with little interactions between BB and Raven. Like when Raven caught BB's eyes in hers when he asked if she wanted to try some. I read this before, but I needed to read it again. It's that good; it keeps me hooked each time. Superb work.

Excellent. I love your stories. You truly have a gift with words.

Lovely.

:)

Rae

A lovely little story that is a great read. I really enjoyed it. I like how you brought the pair of them together without throwing them at one another or warping their characteristics too much. It was skillfully written, and as stated, I really enjoyed reading it.

Well done.

FireDitto

Cool. I like this story. Great job.

Whoah. LOVE that ending!

... She's like vanilla... and lemon curd... what food shall BB compare her to next? *Sarcasum*

Wow, I love it. It's great! Really, I'm not kidding, it is brilliant.

Aw! How sweet! ... and sour, I suppose... _

My first reaction to the abrupt ending was annoyance, but then almost instantly I thought it was very effective somehow, and really fits your style, love the relaxed feel of your stories, nicely done again. (and now that I think of it, great ending) :-)