i love it!

I like your story, but it's been a while since you updated, so please updates soon, I want to read what happens next.

Very interesting story so far. I like the new character and it's nice to see a story with Inara as she is my favorite character in Firefly. Please continue this storyline.

Wonderful, keep writing now, your doing well. Amaya sounds very realistic, i enjoyed the sisterly quarrle
And confiding in simon well done

Interesting. Do you plan on writting more?

Please continue this story. You have me hooked! I look forward to your next update. I love reading Firefly fanfic, there are so many stories to be told. I love this idea. Thanks for sharing.

I thought this was a great first chapter. I'm really curiouse as to what happened to Amaya. And I liked the River Amaya connection. Real intrusting chapter. I hope the next one is just as good or better.

wow, nice job, i usually hate original character stuff, but this was really gripping, Everyone's perfect so far, Mal-lish and all. Very good , can't wait for more

shiny, got me hooked, keep going I'm intrigued to see where you'll take it, it would help if you go into detail at what age Inara left home etc, so we know how long the sisters have been apart, just a suggestion.

Update soon

Inara