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I apologize if you have explained this already, but does Sesshomaru have one or two arms in your story? Just curious. I liked the descriptions of Moriko's home.

Thank you for the explanation of Rin's powers. I'd like to see a quick flashback, if possible. I've been noticing you using both present and past tense in this chapter. Personally, I prefer past tense, but it's up to you.

I enjoy the way you are portraying Inuyasha; you have his attitude down :) I would have liked a litlte more info and more time to lead into Rin's powers and her knowing about them, telling the others about them, etc. Keep writing!

Orpheus and Euridice: one of my favorite myths. Let us hope Sesshomaru will go to the depths of the underworld to save Rin as well.

I'm afraid to ask just what Rin has in mind...

Great story! Please update!=D

First off I would like to say, an alarm clock is a demon, the most annoying demon I wish I could destroy into billions of pieces never to hear that wretched sound again. Second, this chapter was okay, I learned some stuff. Third, please don't make Kouga say it's mating season and he wants her to be his mate, I'm begging you don't do that. Fourth, where in the world did you come up with 'mental hug.' Fifth is a question about my story: Would you read my story over again if I stopped making it from Yumiko's point of view because that would be so much easier for me, but I don't want to lose you as a reviewer, so please answer immediately.
Thank you.

great chapter plz update soon

O! Luv this chapter!! Cant wait for the next to come out...poor Rin though (chuckes) all the sudden BAM she has powers. I hope to hear from you soon!! ^_^

Bravo, bravo. Once again, you did a great job. I would like to say, that just because a chapter is long doesn't always make it better than chapters with a little less writing. Quality is better than quantity. Although there is a line, chapters being to short aren't good. Oh, now I'm boring you. You are very welcomed for the reviews from which you have received from me. I was just wondering, have you read my story, "Forgotten" I have plans, don't worry. I'll give you a short summary if you haven't read it. Here we go: Kagome had witnessed something awfully distressing, which, indeed, caused her to rush home. But unknowingly to her the hanyou that caused her distressful state got there first. When she got there she sealed the well, but then something happens that caused her to lose her memory past her fifteenth birtday. What happened, what caused her distressful state? Read and find out. Please read it. And again great chapter, intresting powers Rin has, ability to talk to animals, *sigh* wish I could do that. I hope I didn't bore you.

oo great this is better than my stories update soon

Yes, Rin is going to make it. You don't seem evil enough to make her die, and besides, if you have something planned with this 'new power' thing it would be completely stupid to write a whole chapter about her and her new mysterious power and then just kill her off. An author would either have something planned that could bring her back to life and be incredibly brave to risk that, or just stupid to kill off someone as important to the show as Rin in the second chapter. And I know you are not stupid considering what I've read. And you know what I think who sent those freaky twin people, I think it's someone who's got the hots for Sesshomaru and is jealous of Rin. Jaken is off being the stupid fool that is Jaken. This has caught my attention, and I will keep reading this until you decide to finish it.

All I can say is that it is okay, it is short so I can't really say that it is a good first impression. To be honest, this chapter is boring, I have come to realize that, when I read books if the first chapter or two does not catch my attention, I will not read the rest, so I suggest that you liven this story up. I will continue to read this, because I'm sure it'll be a fantastic story and I like to see the talent of those who review my stories, thanks for that again. If this sounds mean in any way, it is not meant to be.

So far this is really good. Please update really soon!! I want to know what happens next, and besides if its a Kagura/Sessh, I'm all over it! ^^