Hey Bethany!

You actually posted it! Way to go! I also see you took my advice, and fixed it up :D I'll beta for you any time!

Awsome story! (And I LOVE how my name is on it lol)

~Jordan
(And You're very VERY welcome ;))

NOT VERY GOOD?! This is wonderful! You honestly need to give yourself more credit, because this is a great story. I could actually get a sense of what House was feeling ( physically and emotionally) It was a melancholy oneshot , made all the more disturbing by the Beethoven music playing in the background. I could actually see the scene being played out in my mind as you described it. You are very descriptive and deserve a pat on the back. Good work ! Keep writing because with practice comes perfection.

-Little-Delia

Well written!

Woah...
Thats so good I've had to put lots of o's in so...
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What do you mean it's not very good?
I think you did a great job portraying the pain and torment House was dealing with during that time.
Actually, I like Stacy.

OHH, so tormented! I could really feel the pain. Made me cringe. Are you going to continue this story? Also, does this take place before she ordered the surgery? Sorry if I didn't catch that somewhere.