Reviews for As the Hawk Flies

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pandi-chan 2007-06-04 ch 22,	abusesorry i havent been here a while... NO! dont do it! keep everything the way it is... please.
outlook 2007-05-12 ch 22,	abusePlease continue this story!! I love it
Kagura 2007-03-10 ch 22, anon.	abuseI really enjoyed reading your fic!! You did an excellent job the first time around, but the ideas you have for the rewrite sound really awesome too. I say go for it! ^^ Good luck!
emm-ee-emm 2007-02-21 ch 22,	abuseThat sounds okay, although I know little of Inuyasha. Please continue this story, whatever you do. em_ee_em
Inquisitorchass 2007-02-20 ch 22,	abuseI'm not so sure the crossover idea is good. If there are a lot of strong point then it might be valid but instead of a crossover simply use the ideas put forward. As for Keoni changing to the Crow I'm undecided on the matter. Sure they're a lot darker and meaner and perhaps past generations have been crows. Is there a chance he could be half crow half hawk? The hawk would then signify the fact Keoni isn't like Oni Taka who would use the Crow as his embodiment. I am aware that the two birds are completely different from one another, so the entire body would need to be altered if it was a half and half mix. Overall, your original fic (ie this one) is excellent. It tells a great story and, if anything, needs only minor touchups to improve it beyond excellent. The story doesn't need reworking as such, a writer's biggest critic is himself/herself. I should know, my current major project has gone through four re-writes so far and, despite the current work being good, it still needs it. However, this fanfic is of a quality I'd kill to have in my own work (don't take the 'killing' part seriously). I'm glad you added that you'd continue this branch. Out of kindness and a sense of owing I will at least first the first few chapters of the re-write. I might change my mind and enjoy it, i just have no knowledge of Inuyasha so I'm a little stand off-ish. Update THIS fic soon, I want to see Keoni and Saki again! Regards, Inquisitorchass
Ashyx 2007-02-20 ch 22,	abuseWell, I would definitely read the rewrite if you wrote it. I think it sounds like a good idea!
Mina Yume 2007-02-20 ch 22,	abusewell for the new idea one, i trust your abilaty as a writer but please please please continue this one! i love it and i think i'm not the only one
Inquisitorchass 2006-12-21 ch 21,	abuseGod I missed the humor you pack into a chapter. I haven't laughed so much in a long time. I'm glad you managed to write chapter 21, I can't wait to see what happens in the up coming chapters. Fried sushi? Keep in mind not all cravings are food, my girlfriend's brother's girlfriend (get your tongue around that one!) once craved playing Monopoly, she wouldn't give up until EVERYONE sat down and played it with her. Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter (though I'm still trying to figure what Ki would do with Shigure and the poor camera (something painful is as far as I get)). Can't wait to see what chaos and mayhem await our young father-to-be but I'm sure we all want things to be at least somewhat nice. Regards, Inquisitorchass (=I=)
adnahc. 2006-12-17 ch 21,	abusewoah. i'm surprised. i can't wait until you update. :D -kamu
emm-ee-emm 2006-12-16 ch 21,	abuseNice! This story is still going! The story will only end when the main character dies. Next ten chapters, here we come! Oh, BTW, funny chapter! Even with months since the last one, it's still as funny as the first 20.
Mina Yume 2006-12-16 ch 21,	abuseYOUR ALIVE! im so happy! alright try to update as soon as possible ok? i really love your story alot!! hugs bye^_^
Ashyx 2006-12-16 ch 21,	abuseyou're...ALIVE! i was so worried!! hahaha - cool!! i new chapter! i've been waiting for one...^^ i know what it's like though - you get tangled up in school or work or just don't have any inspiration XD ooh man that's so cool, really made my day..or night since i'm reading this at...1:00 in the morning^^
Mina Yume 2006-07-25 ch 3,	abuseplz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update son! this is my fav story!
Chris73 2006-07-08 ch 20,	abuseyea! you updated! i thought u were just gonna end the story last chap. for the last question on who should catch the flowers... i hav no clue. just do wat seems best. -chris S
Flaggot4ever 2006-06-13 ch 20,	abuseI was really happy when I saw this. Because I thought the story ended at Chapter 19. So, when I came back to read it again, cause it was so0o0o0o0o0o0o0o00 good. I was so0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o happy to see a chapter 20. PLEASE UNPDATE A.S.A.P.!

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