loved it update soon

Sweet...I like this...


by da way this is natasha

That made me laugh! And it was so well-done, both plotwise and poetrywise. Nice job.

Really cool but at first I didn't know where it was from so it scared me a bit,but still really cool.

very god i liked it a lot! u did a great job rhyming and keeping the story very in character
i loved it!

ha! that was so funny! aahh, that really made me laugh, it was so simple but the plot line was classic! i loved it, and enjoyed it the entire time! so cute, very clever! great rhyming, you make it look so easy! i loved it, keep it up!!

I wasn't exactly expecting a poem on this site... but it was remarkable! You have excellent rhyming skills, I am very impressed! Please write another for all your fans, and make it just as good, okay? Super. Bye!

omigosh i REALLY like that! it was really koolish! i liked how it was a ryming poem! and thats kinda kool how it turned out like that he was his onw grandpda1 way koolish!

-BrOwnEyedcutie:)

ps. you really good at ryming!;)

LOL that was cute!! Great job with the rhyming. I really enjoyed it :-D