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Ultimolu
2009-08-13 . chapter 1
Wow, this is really good. Going on my favorites for moar reading. :3
VivaColdplay
2009-08-12 . chapter 15
That was amazingly awesome. :O
Loved the ending!
MaceEcam
2009-08-05 . chapter 15
Good ending to a good story.
121evac
2009-07-29 . chapter 1
A very well crafted start to this story. Am looking forward to your later chapters. 5 Stars to you! ;)
Samantha-san13
2009-06-28 . chapter 15
I really loved this story, and I loved the ending.

"Cold liquid metal lips on human lips. Love. That strange human thing that bound them all together in their darkest years. The thing that pushed them from the brink of extinction. The thing that to this day puts them together and makes them better. That human thing that kept him bound to her. That kept him following her all those years. That was love. That strange little human thing. He didn’t even know he loved her, he didn’t even know he had ever wanted this from her, until she did it."

Best paragraph ever. You write extremely well.
Samantha-san13
2009-06-27 . chapter 5
I love the relationship that Tyler and Ellie have. It's cute, and they need each other. I hope everything works out for them.
Samantha-san13
2009-06-27 . chapter 1
I really like this so far. It's well thought out and descriptive, and the plot is great. I like the description of you and your friend at the end. "Tyler's on t.v!" lol That's adorable. Reminds me of me and my friends.
Mark
2009-04-06 . chapter 15
Excellent.

Thanks.
Emperor Jaden
2009-01-24 . chapter 1
Well, THIS looks like it will be fun! Can't wait to read more.
Morgomir
2008-12-21 . chapter 15
The story is great. It really is a perfect way for the Terminator series to end. Your characters were brilliant. Keep up the good work.
Exilo
2008-12-09 . chapter 1
Damn, a story three years in the making. I've only read the first chapter, so I don't know when, if ever, i will get around to reading the rest of it.

Firstly, you write this with a bleakness that so many authors strive for and yet so many fail at. Just a sense of hopelessness as this little survivor walks through a shattered earth. Its powerful stuff. I'm definately intriqued and curious what will happen.

There are some problems with the grammar, but seeing as this chapter was written three years ago, i'm sure that you've matured in that aspect. You're creativity is top notch, and i can only immagine how that has changed.
AimzNemesis
2008-10-05 . chapter 15
Wonderful ending to a wonderful fanfic. I've been following this story over the past few days, and it does not disappoint. Well done!
bookmonkey786
2008-10-03 . chapter 15
Loved you take on the T 10. Hope you write another one.
Uknown
2008-08-05 . chapter 15
That was the perfect ending to the best of the Terminator fanfics. You are win.
little wind
2008-08-03 . chapter 15
Great job. I've been following your story for almost two years, and I can't believe it hasn't received more reviews than this. Ellie and Tyler's story is beautiful and touching without being sappy or contrived. I was hoping for the developments in chapter 15, and was not disappointed. Thanks for writing such an original Terminator story!
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