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| FireChildSlytherin5 2008-05-26 ch 3, | abuseNice story so far. Anymore soon? |
| Pandora of Ithilien 2006-09-20 ch 3, | abuseoh, for force's sake! (hey, it's a star wars fic, the term fits) ;) anyway, did you have to leave it there? not that i can talk, really, not without being a hypocrite, but still! update soon! |
| JediDaughter1 2006-09-10 ch 3, | abuseSweet story. I love Anakin staying on the lightside fics. Please continue this. |
| Gregg Lobien 2006-03-31 ch 2, anon. | abuseI liked this story, please add more. |
| tejdog1 2005-12-14 ch 2, anon. | abuseGood story :) One tiny suggestion - break up the speech in the paragraphs. For example - the ending paragraph for chapter 2...should be a few lines, not one paragraph, but aside from that, the story rocks. |
| sewardsfolly 2005-12-14 ch 2, | abusei liked this, one comment it would be easier to read if every quote you did a new paragraph, it just gets jumbled. but i love anakin doesn't turn evil fics, keep it up! |
| Ehre 2005-12-14 ch 2, | abuseSweet. |
| JessicaTheFair 2005-12-14 ch 1, | abusegreat start |
| Anakin's Girl 4eva 2005-12-14 ch 1, | abuseThis was good, I'd like to see more of this fan fic. I also wrote an alternate ending, check it out if you want. :-) Update soon! |
| Angelheart 2005-12-14 ch 1, anon. | abusevery good. please continue with the story! |