Great! Just a great hit. I'm not a fan on ShadxAmy parts, but it's all good. I still have to read the remixed version. Keep doing what you're doing

i love this story so much! i really think someone should make pics for this.. you should look on and see if any one has got some pics that match any of ur story chapters.. ive looked for lots of stuff on their and it is awsome!.. anyway i just think it needs more ROMANCE!! =.>

Awesome story!

I would really like to finish reading this but it's a school night.

This would be about the fourth time I've read your story, as it was that interesting to me, and I've just now noticed something about this chapter that was...off.

Tails was able to find that book in the public area of the library, so that means it's open to the public, right? If that's the case, then how come no one ever figured out the Master Emerald's true purpose before, and destroyed it?

I'm not saying the chapter's bad, I just thought I'd voice my opinion is all.

I really love this story you wrote:D I read the whole thing twice already

Nudity actually isn't against the site's policy. Actual sex is against the site's policy, but simple nudity is okay.

Better yet, if you want to go all out and still be safe, you could post your director's cut onto a site called AdultFanFictiondotnet, which *only* allows R or NC-17-rated fanfiction.

Hey! I read this last year, and it's still the best thing in the Sonic the Hedgehog section. Great plot, Excellent Charachter development and an unbelievably great writing style. If you haven't read this your life is incomplete.

Signed, Force Hog

tails... NO! I THOUGHT WE WERE FRIENDS... OR R WE? NAH ME N TAILS R CHILLZ. GD FIC. I HAVE INSOMNIA @_@

damn ur gd. it actually sounds if it wud b real or in a game. gd job man for making a long fic for us sonic fans to read. PEACE! guillermo a.k.a. ecuatorianotails

whens taiream comin i cnt wait XD. epic fic so far

Best ever this one rocked!

Wow... this is so Legend of Dragoon. OMG. Its great. This could almost, ALMOST be a game x-over of Sonic and Legend of Dragoon. Great job.

I like Nazo... Exspecially he ain't wearing any pants. AH HA! Pants! XD
Lord Nazo: Quiet you!
Nazo (from Sonic: Nazo Unleashed): -pops out- Who the FECK are you?!
Lord Nazo: Who are you?!
Dr. Weird: -wearing a Lord Vader's mask- I'm your FATHER!
All: ...

O_o Wow, this is quite weird... And interesting, too... Alas, though, I must depart for now. I'll say, though, that you've now got me hooked. The part with Sonic and Tahra a few chapters back was also quite funny, especially the part where one of them mentions "it seems like we're in a rushed novel." :D

Anyway, it does seem that things came by a little fast, but it is still quite interesting, nonetheless. Espio's little cameo earlier was also a nice addition. However, the whole thing with Amy was a little obvious... Though not the thing about the "Dragon Queen." That is what caught me by surprise. Eggman's little segment where he managed to capture the Chaos Emeralds was quite nice, though. I always loved seeing the doctor rise to power.

Anyway, I shall continue reading, later.

Hmm... I wasn't sure how this would turn out, but actually, I think it's surprisingly cute. I was never too fond of the "Shadow/Amy" pairing, but I'll continue reading this, anyway--it's starting to get rather interesting. However, I do know that it's not really that new of a work. Does seem that it has been edited recently, though.

Anyway, I'll read a little more tonight.