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Reviews for: Special Roast
Micayasha
2007-07-05 . chapter 1
That was wonderful! You captured Squall's voice so well (especially the first three lines - I laughed out loud)! I love how subtle you were about Squall's mysterious benefactor, but not so much that readers can't figure out who sent it. The anonymity of the note, for some reason, makes it more effective.

This makes me wonder how Laguna got the coffee into Squall's cupboard!

This was fantastic, though. Little nitpick, though - you say Squall filled his coffe mug up to the 'brink', but I think you mean 'brim'? According to a brink is 'any extreme edge; verge.'
FizzyTopKyle
2006-03-05 . chapter 1
Aw. That was really cute. I wonder who gave him the beans? :)
Verdanii
2005-12-15 . chapter 1
That was lovely *-*! Did Laguna did that? Or Ellone? POOPERS CUTE!
AuraMistress
2005-12-15 . chapter 1
It's really good. :)
Laura
2005-12-14 . chapter 1
May I please say one thing and one thing alone?

"AW!"
Ikonopeiston
2005-12-14 . chapter 1
I fear I have been away from this FF too long. I did not understand the meaning of the last sentence. Alas.

Even with that handicap, I appreciate the skill with which you set your scene and your steadily improving facility in telling a story with all the bells and whistles required.
Angel Taisha
2005-12-14 . chapter 1
That was very lovely, Ry. It was a nice little treat to go along with my mug of hot chocolate.
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