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| Bonzai1990 2008-06-04 ch 29, | abusehehe I liked it! to be honest... it took me a while to actually read your story, but now that I have... I'm happy! I really like your story... and I would like for you to continue... cuz I see that your last update was July 13 last year... it's sad to you've stopped! |
| -X-.Giggles.-X- 2008-05-25 ch 29, | abuseI know you've not updated this fic in lyk, a year but i really like it. It holds my attention, something unusual coz normally with long fics I get bored after chapter 5 but with this i didnt want to stop reading. I love Rikku being really powerful coz i hate it when she's the weak little girl Auron always has to save! And I think the Mermaid dress sphere it totally cute lol |
| The Clang 2007-08-10 ch 29, | abuseThis is excellently hilarious and fluffy They're so cute together Don't tell anybody I said that, okay? Please? |
| Fififelicity 2007-06-14 ch 20, | abuseLove the story. I'm concerned by their nightmares though, please don't make her die! It's all very intriguing, please write again son! |
| telcontarian 2007-06-14 ch 29, | abuseI'm really glad that you're still writing this. Anyway, very nice chapter. There were some parts that just really made me burst out laughing: Rikku threatening Auron with castration and Braska turning their love story into a trash novel, for example. XDXD Anyway, please update soon! Don't keep us waiting months. :( Tari |
| phedre87 2007-06-13 ch 29, | abuseWow...I am so excited to see an update! It's been awhile since I read your story (gonna have to reread the whole thing) but it was one of my favorite aurikku stories. The new chapter is great, thanks for the update! :) |
| Drachegirl14 2007-06-13 ch 29, | abuseIt was wonderful! So glad you had time to update . . . Now I want more and more! Please continue to write for us. |
| Viva La Kitty 2007-05-02 ch 28, | abuseOh man. You HAVE to update. If not, I'll kill you with my icecream spoon! Also, this sudden twist of Auron and Rikku's families is a little odd. I know that Rikku loves her family and all... but, you know, I reckon she'd stay with Auron. It's because of all the hot sex she's having. I mean, if she went back to her Spira, then where'd the sex go?! |
| darkwolfslayer 2007-04-21 ch 28, | abusethis is an amusing read. i love your sense of humor, seriously auron hating peas? fricken hilarious! i hope you update soon and keep up the hilarity! |
| phedre87 2007-04-06 ch 25, | abuseI just finished with chap. 25, but thought I'd leave a review before continuing. This is such a great story, I love it. You are also a very good writer. This is definitely my new favorite auronxrikku story. Keep up the good work. Also, the pirate thing is hilarious! |
| Shirox 2007-03-06 ch 28, | abuseI had really great fun reading it! Hilarious fic:) And Auron is so cute when he's embarrassed :3 Update soon please:) |
| marajade963 2007-01-12 ch 28, | abuseGlad you updated. Does this mean you're better? I hope so. So Auron doesn't like peas ehh? Don't blame him, they are insidious and no one should ever have to suffer them. And far to many mixed veg packets always add the bloody peas! Umm sorry. Loved this update. Glad Auron could admit his feelings even if it was only to Braska and himself. One step closer I think. Looking forward to more. |
| Drachegirl14 2007-01-08 ch 28, | abuseIt was good! Sorry to hear you've been sick . . . . Hope you're feeling better! Anyway, more soon please! |
| Silvershark 2007-01-07 ch 28, | abuseWell, I think my favorite line in that one was "I doubt fate would try to make me happy by throwing a scantily clad woman at me." Definitely made me giggle, though there were definitely quite a few that I laughed at. I'm glad that you are beginning to write in the concern of Auron and that he is thinking about it. Now I wonder if Rikku is thinking of it as well. She is sort of non-caring in a way that she probably wouldn't think too much on it, but is she actually wondering? Or she just of the opinion that anything can happen as it did with both Titus and Yuna? Just what I am thinking. So far, really enjoying it, your sense of humor is quite refreshing. |
| Chicken Tree Arm 2007-01-06 ch 28, | abusethankyou, this has been just what i need. please update again soon. i loved this chapter, who'd of thought, Auron playing with his food. i hope he gets to feel better about rikku not being from the same universe type thing soon as well, a depressed auron is a very mildly less attractive auron. for a pixalated image, he's tysh caqo. some more fluff or even a bit of lime an lemon wouldn't hurt either. anyways, i'm still loving this fic, so carry on writing it the way you want it to go |