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| magicsiren91 2006-10-08 ch 1, | abusei thought that was kinda cool the way raven actually went into the doctors office with beast boy and she was actually nice about his phobia |
| reallyravenroth 2006-08-21 ch 1, | abuseaw, cute. although i didn't expect raven to be so.. giving. (i sound like a raven hater... to be honest, i love her to bits... but not like that.) |
| The Wicked Witch of Dingl 2006-03-25 ch 1, | abuseAww... sweet... best pairing ever! |
| robins#1fan 2006-01-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseSweet!! I think it's kinda cute the way Raven helped out Beast Boy. That was unusually nice of her! |
| Marisa Because I'm Special 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuseAWW it's cute who ever thought that BB would be afriad of the doc's office of course at least he didn't have to go to the vet o,o |
| Purple Wolf Girl 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuseGood story! Um...this isn't a flame but it is a suggestion: I think you used 'said' and 'asked' too many times. Maybe you should try 'began' or questioned' or 'remarked' or something like that. You don't have to, but it might look better as viewers are reading. It IS your story so I'm not going to tell you how to do it. I think you wrote a very nice story and the ending was cute! :) Everyone was in character and it was a good story...so just keep writing ones as cute as this doctor story! But again, this is NOT a flame. PWG ^_^ |
| Southern-Rebels 2005-12-14 ch 1, | abuseNot bad. Tolerable, not extremely interesting, but a new idea, which is always good on fanfictino. Cliche story plots get really annoying, even if you like them. It wasn't particularly humourous, but the general idea was amusing. I SERIOUSLY doubt Robin would have even budged for a shot though. Now the other Titans reactions are ENTIRELY in character. But Robin's nearly killed himself...doubt a prick would hurt. The Starfire situation left you a tad hanging, but that's okay. Overall, it was okay. :) |