Hm, I like it!

~Mooneyº

I'm really beginning to become enamored with this pairing and stories like this one are just making it harder to turn away from it. The story is simply wonderful.

wow...I'm breathless. that was amazing! I...wow. extremely well-written, beautiful use of words, awesome imagery. you get a 12/10. totally love it!!^_^

Hmn, this is okay. Even though you've properly seperated them with semi-colons and commas, your sentences are still too long. The words of the sentences are sweet, but I think it'd be better if you actually took some of them and made them into two or three sentences. Other than that, good job.
-Silenced

That's so sweet and angsty, I adore it.
FMA rocks and you put these two characters together fantastically! Love it.

You know what? The pairing... is an interesting one ^^

Wow, your writing style's amazing. There's an extreme lack of Rose/Winry on here,(yours is the only one) which is sad. Be nice if you'd write more, but just this is good too.

Nifty. I especially liked the line, "...a merciful saint whose skilled hands healed sinners and sins alike without judgement..."

nice. short but sweet.