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Jane Black278
2009-08-29 . chapter 1
You should continue with this story ;D is very good :D and funny xD hahahaa typical Goku xD good job :)
Shashuko the Paisley Maiden
2006-10-09 . chapter 1
XD poor Chichi!
Ohohohohohoho!
quiennie
2006-02-25 . chapter 1
Oh, that was such a sweet story!
kikyothepriestess05
2006-01-24 . chapter 1
Cute ^_^ and i think you should make this into a story. I bet you get a lot of reviews if ya did and if you ever decide too, i will keep you on alert just in case. *wink*
Uozumi
2006-01-05 . chapter 1
XD Ah! That's so them! Poor Chichi!

~ Uozumi
Garowyn
2005-12-21 . chapter 1
Heh, that was hilarious! Typical Goku.
Ladii-Chocolate
2005-12-21 . chapter 1
Yah, definitely loved it. I don't see many Goku/Chi-Chi stories these days... I oughta start looking. :3

Ladii-Chocolate
Kinoha
2005-12-20 . chapter 1
Heh heh hee... that was grand and cute! ChiChi sure was **. But hey; how can you know about kissing it none has ever told you about it? Go Goku!

Write more! You have some promise! I surely would like to read more!

Writies!
Nisha
2005-12-17 . chapter 1
It's really cute, but I think it should definately be continued, it makes a great start to a story.
Amaya the Sage of Storms
2005-12-17 . chapter 1
I loved it, but it was too short. I think you picked up on Goku's personality well.
Gosha
2005-12-16 . chapter 1
Yes, i agree this shouldn't be left as a one-shot. It didn't feel like one. It seems as though there should be more to it. It is very good however, and very typical of Goku. You should really think about continuing it because its got the potential k^^

Good luck and well done

Kami bless
super saiyan 4 chichi
2005-12-15 . chapter 1
Yep...leave it to Goku to say somethin' like that. XD

Anyways, I think you should continue, this does't really have the closure that most 'oneshots' have. The last sentence lingers, and makes you wonder what will happen next.

Good story ^__^
Goku's Mistress
2005-12-15 . chapter 1
Aww.. Cute..
GM
Afiong Bassey
2005-12-15 . chapter 1
Aw how sweat! Goku's so clueless sometimes. It's just one kiss! I wish a boy would kiss me.. Will you continue?
Chemical connection and Drake
2005-12-15 . chapter 1
Aw that was so sweet, well done :)
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