dammit... that was the gretest story ever... Those Ing bastards are **. I beat the game and I like the Idea of the log entries. great fic.

Very interesting. I'd love to see the continuation of this, from Denys's perspective.

Definately different but very good. The descriptions were excellant, and the interactions between the soldiers seemed very real, as did your characters. This was extremely well done.
~Lemurian-Girl~

Please make the chapter on Deny. I love stories where the troopers story is told.

Thankyou..! :'< Thankyou very much. The total massacre of the soldiers tainted my playthrough of MP2, but this story makes me feel much better. ^_^ (For a lot of reasons, one of them being when they actually found and interacted with the Luminoth.) I loved those soldiers.
I'll just pretend this is canon next time I play through MP2, then the battle against the Ing will feel more charged. XD

And I wouldn't mind Denys's chapter one bit!

As far as crit, well...not much from me! Watch your spelling and grammar, eatcher' veggies, don't do drugs. That's that! :>