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Yuniko1987
2008-07-16
ch 1,
abuseI hope you can come with more Tyrael fanfics. Sorry it's just the idea of an archangel falling in love is something that most people can dream of and know that the liklyhood of that happening would only remain in our dreams and stories that we write.
reviewer
2008-05-03
ch 10, anon.
abusetyrael is ugly, not handsome.
forever-derelict
2008-03-24
ch 15,
abusebest diablo story i have ever read. i cried in chapter 10 and 12 :(. you are an amazing author
forever-derelict
2008-03-24
ch 10,
abusebeautiful chapter. its not as graphic as some other stories but it was still very well written and fit perfectly in your story.
Dane
2008-02-16
ch 15, anon.
abuseDamn, this story is awesome, although you treated David like some sНit, I mean he probably waited for this promotion and some mortal bitсh become an archangel for merely killin three primal evils at once this suсks!
And that friggin tirada of Atsanit to David that took place in "life goes on" chapter suсks either.
I mean he's an angel dammit! If I was David I would probably showed that little Zann Esu whоre her real place, heh-heh..
Anyway this story deserves to live along with you because Three Supreme Primal Evils will never be destroyed! Cause people still hate destruct and do whatever they please ha-ha-ha!
Ko Pilot
2007-11-05
ch 15,
abuseThere were some things that were questionable, but I'm glad that someone finally wrote a fic surrounding Tyrael.
vince80
2007-03-14
ch 14, anon.
abusefirst of all, please forgive my very bad english ( I am french...)
Now, speaking of your story...wouah! i really enjoyed reading it , from beginning to the end. I like the fact that a romance story can take place along with a story of endless war and battles such as those brought by this game. you know, I'm a hopelessly thich romantic man and I thank you to bring some droplets of sweetness in this world of brute force and evil. I particularly appreciate the discovering of love by Tyrael (sniff, poor thing...) and the fact that a poor and weak person ALWAYS has something to teach to a stronger one.
The only bad thing (I HATE to say those 2 words) I notice is the lack concerning the reaction of the Heaven against Tyrael's feelings and behaviour. (It's the ONLY thing i notice, the rest was perfect)
I hope that you will write other great stories like "archangels learn"

Vince80

PS : again please forgive my VERY BAD english...
Stormfeather
2007-03-09
ch 15,
abuseFantastic story, easily the best Diablo II fiction I've read. Glad to know that you've had fun writing it. :)
Fallengod
2006-09-16
ch 15, anon.
abuseYou know..i normally don't review stories to often...quite honestly not many of them are not good enough to waste the time and energy...Diablo is a magnificent game...I've played and beaten it countless times..and, as I've liked the game so much, I've also read many fanfictions about it..but, every story I've read pales in comparison to this..I've always wondered about tyrael..and I glad to see I'm not the only one..amazing story..The best Diablo fanfiction I have ever read..you should be proud..not of my praise ofcourse..but of your accomplishment..simply amazing...

Shane(aka)Fallengod
Pinguicha
2006-09-12
ch 15,
abuseFirst, let me tell you that this is, like, one of the best Diablo fanfictions I've come across. Truly :) I don't even know why I checked the Diablo fanfiction section (having not played the game in years ^^;), but I am glad I did. You have a really heartwarming story here; you said you wanted to give lil' ol' Tyrael a personality and you did it just right.
There are a few issues, though, albeit minor. You tend to repeat words a bit too much in too close sentences. I know exactly why, as English is not my first language either, and it gets a bit iffy when you're writing. Another point, it's that you didn't explain Atsanit's sudden falling in love with Tyrael; she basically said it out of the blue.

But it's still a truly good piece you have here, and it's going straight into my favourites list! :D
Jasko Lefey
2006-05-30
ch 15,
abusevery very very very good fic
TheOnlyOne20001
2006-05-02
ch 1,
abusevery nice, though i fond the rougues story a bit more entrtaining
Tegaladwen
2006-03-16
ch 15, anon.
abuseAll good things evantually come to an end...sadly...
It is a beautiful story and I will miss the weekly checking for updaits...
I have been thinking for the last days and came to the conclusion that I cannot decide what part was the best, what part I liked best...Every chapter was something special and each one took my breath away with its uniqueness...It is indeed the best diablo sory on in my opinion.
Tegaladwen
BloodHeron
2006-03-15
ch 15, anon.
abuseWow, tis a beautiful ending. As to which part is my favorite, I really can't say. Some parts were excellent action sequences, others, breathtaking emotional plays. This story is like a jigsaw puzzle. Each individual piece is beautiful unto itself, but together, they all make up a marvelous bigger picture. Each piece must be treasured and appreciated, but also so must be the whole creation. But, that's just my opinion:) Some people will prefer the action, others the emotion. Either way, you have earned my respect in both fields.
Aditu
2006-03-13
ch 15,
abuseAw, how sweet! I hope, they two of them will be happy in Heaven. *throw-confetti*

Just as I said innumerable times before, this story is a real fine piece of art!

And now to your request: the part of the story I liked best. Hm, though choice. There are two parts I liked very much: First the fight against Duriel, where Atsanit and Tyrael first met. How he sensed her and helped her and your way of desrcibing it glued me to this story. I just love it!
The second part is weaved into this story: the way you described Atsanits every-day life. How she prepared for battle, how she walked out into the wilderness to fight demons, her tactics, how she came back for healing, sleep, food, advice. Please, don´t ask me, why I picked this part, I just felt comfortable while reading this stuff.

*sniff* Hu, the last review for this story. I will miss it! But we´ll read each other at your other stories. *g*

Greetings

Aditu

P.S.: It´s funny, that Atsanit is the Inuit-word for the Aurora borealis. It is one of my dreams to see the northern lights with my own eyes one day. It really fascinates me and I just had to smile as I read your piece of information.
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