The way you wire is so beautiful, I feel bad for puppy Inuyasha though but I find this story moving in its own way.

Yes, with Sesshy.. This is where it all began. No wonder InuYasha said before that men never show their tears... no matter what.

Awesome great plot"

Incredible...for a moment there i thought it was Rin but then i thought again he would never...great story!

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Wow...

I liked this a lot! Well above much of the InuYasha FF I've ever read.

"Men and children cry. Adults endure." -Have you ever read The Otori? It's a series of books, set in a place that's not really Japan, but very Japanese.

I like the element of IY not being so much resentful, but wishing to please Sesshomaru. I love that kind of stuff.

I just read it again, I am Voice of a dead lover. That is so cute I love it and Sessy can spank me any day TeeHeehee. Um... don't tell my mom I just said that!

This was my kind of story but it was hard to read, poor Yaya.

Sesshomaru learned this lesson the exact same way I'm sure. But I would not care if he cryed for I would love him still.

This was a very powerful piece and I liked it a lot.

You're a very gifted writer.

Interesting Fanfic.

sesshomaru is mean to inu puppy

Oh my, what an intersting take on Inuyasha! Very very nice indeed. I like the pensive quality of this story, and also I think you did a great job on depicting Inuyasha's point of view. So sad, but really well written. _

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he's a man.

oh that was so sad. im crying just from reading it.

I like this story! It was short, but powerful!

That was so...sad. Well, he did cry in one episode...but this is so, well, dunno how to say it. Sessy, you're so mean to your little brother!