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| emeraldcyclone 2008-05-21 ch 8,  | abuseMaybe a little out of character, but I think you wrote it well, and didn't overuse it. Think of it as sprinkles. They're good on sweets every now and then, in small quantities. . . and you did just that. I thought this was great. Probably my favorite that I've reviewed out of this group so far. |
| emeraldcyclone 2008-05-20 ch 3, | abuseHa ha, I like this one alot as well. You keep to character very well in my opinion, but nothing stale or overused. Very nice. |
| emeraldcyclone 2008-05-15 ch 1, | abuseHa ha, that was cute at the end. Very nice descriptions throughout the entire chapter. The descriptions of the colors were very creative and well described. Nicely done, I didn't think that it sucked at all. |
| mylovemiroku 2008-04-03 ch 10, | abuseI think I am one of your old readers and I had this one on my email update list. I actually really like this chapter, especially the ending and the fact the Maes is in it (love him!) Glad you decided to finish this and I will check out your new stuff soon. |
| MoonStarDutchess 2008-04-01 ch 10, | abuseWonderful finish to a wonderful collection. I look forward to your other writings. |
| Kawaiichibi2345 2008-03-30 ch 10, | abuse"I'll take the paperweight back now." Ahh... genius. |
| Kawaiichibi2345 2008-03-30 ch 1, | abusesoo cute! I love that! |
| YourFavouitePlushie 2008-03-30 ch 10, | abuseI loved reading this chapter, loved the ending! |
| Ruingaraf 2008-03-30 ch 10, | abuseHaha, cute. Loved the midlife crisis line. |
| Bizzy 2007-10-15 ch 1, | abuseTHIS IS YOUR FIC! i have read this quite a few times but i never reviewed, but now i'm like wait a second, and it's YOUR FIC1!! i love this. especially the end |
| sniperalchemist 2007-09-24 ch 1, | abuse^_^ great job, really beautiful! i, too, really like your writing style. im tottaly IN LOVE with the angts (i've been writing too much lately...o0) cant wait for more of your stories! |
| Adelaide MacGregor 2006-12-13 ch 10, | abuseVery well done, you write very well. Some of the stories could have a bit more conversation, the constant narration gets a bit...boring. Good luck! |
| garrettignasia 2006-10-04 ch 10, | abusesomewhere you wrote that one of your worst flaws is overwriting things, but i personally dont think thats the case. i love how perfectly detailed your writing is, and it annoys me when people underwrite. i hope youll start more stories, if thats not too much to ask. i know you have these two, both of which i am following. cant wait for the next update! |
| hmmingbird 2006-07-16 ch 10, | abuseDid I already mention that I love your writing style? Yes, I believe I did. God, I sound redundant. Brilliance, yet again, but I expected nothing less. Will there be anymore of these? |
| Sayuri-Jen 2006-06-03 ch 1, | abuseAh I loved how the color question answered itself at the end, and how it was totally Roy&Riza. I loved it! |