Aw, that was so adorable! Nicely done.

Maybe a little out of character, but I think you wrote it well, and didn't overuse it. Think of it as sprinkles. They're good on sweets every now and then, in small quantities. . . and you did just that. I thought this was great. Probably my favorite that I've reviewed out of this group so far.

Ha ha, I like this one alot as well. You keep to character very well in my opinion, but nothing stale or overused. Very nice.

Ha ha, that was cute at the end. Very nice descriptions throughout the entire chapter. The descriptions of the colors were very creative and well described. Nicely done, I didn't think that it sucked at all.

I think I am one of your old readers and I had this one on my email update list. I actually really like this chapter, especially the ending and the fact the Maes is in it (love him!) Glad you decided to finish this and I will check out your new stuff soon.

Wonderful finish to a wonderful collection. I look forward to your other writings.

"I'll take the paperweight back now." Ahh... genius.

soo cute! I love that!

I loved reading this chapter, loved the ending!

Haha, cute. Loved the midlife crisis line.

THIS IS YOUR FIC! i have read this quite a few times but i never reviewed, but now i'm like wait a second, and it's YOUR FIC1!! i love this. especially the end

^_^ great job, really beautiful! i, too, really like your writing style. im tottaly IN LOVE with the angts (i've been writing too much lately...o0) cant wait for more of your stories!

Very well done, you write very well. Some of the stories could have a bit more conversation, the constant narration gets a bit...boring. Good luck!

somewhere you wrote that one of your worst flaws is overwriting things, but i personally dont think thats the case. i love how perfectly detailed your writing is, and it annoys me when people underwrite. i hope youll start more stories, if thats not too much to ask. i know you have these two, both of which i am following. cant wait for the next update!

Did I already mention that I love your writing style? Yes, I believe I did. God, I sound redundant. Brilliance, yet again, but I expected nothing less. Will there be anymore of these?