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Sarah Lang 2008-07-21 ch 4, anon.	abuseI was overwhelmed by the gratification of just reading this...it was absolutely breath-taking. As corny as it may sound, I'm still having difficulty breathing as I type; my mind is doing loopty loops in the air. All this added to the fact that I can't wipe this stupid, goofy smile off my face. As I said before, this is just...too magnificent of a story to be put into exact words. I feel like nothing I say will come close to truly expressing what I feel about this fic—and what this fic deserves. Although I shall try. This story absolutely blows me away. It’s written so brilliantly that I don’t think any words of mine can do justice in expressing how MARVELOUS this fic is. I was in sheer bliss while reading everything. Your writing structure was smooth and so fulfilling to the soul. I guess it may be because I’m a grammar freak; I absolutely can’t stand it when I see huge, gaping grammatical errors in fanfiction (especially good fanfiction). If I saw any grammatical errors in this fic, I may have just skimmed over them because they were too miniscule to account with. I couldn’t even think properly while reading—it was as if I was being taken for a wild, thrilling ride of fantasy, and all I needed to do was lay back and close my eyes, and enjoy the ride to its fullest. Everything...Everything is written so beautifully, intricately and delicately crafted to your ways. Please, don't ever turn this story away. This piece of art is just too brilliant to ignore. It will continue to leave people in astonishment and wonder at everything this story has. The plots, characters, and of course, your will for writing. Do not turn this loveable story away. Everything you write always seems to have that magical sparkle in which others are not gifted with. And you know, if I knew how to reach you, I would PAY you to finish this fic. I was thinking about $10-20 (American currency) per chapter, depending how long they were. This fic is too good to pass up. I've read other fantastic (but incompleted) fics before where I knew I would go crazy if I didn't read an ending, but I never felt the need to pay for people to finish. I know there's not much motivation for people to finish what they do (especially when it comes to fanfiction) when there isn't much to look forward to except the feeling of pride that comes when you complete a task. This fic is seriously driving me insane--to the point where I can't function properly in my daily life because my thoughts are filled with this fic, and only this fic. Please, I beg of you, please finish this story. I don’t know what else to say except…please. Don’t give up on this.
Ro0tin4Kagome 2008-06-04 ch 4,	abuseOh dear I really like this story!! Do you plan on continuing it>?
RedWingedAngel002 2008-06-04 ch 4,	abuseOMG NO! THE CHAPTER IS OVER?! You can leave it like THAT! ITs getting so interesting! T∆T Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 2008-06-04 ch 3,	abuseOMG THE CLIFFIE!! THE SUSPENCE! AH! Who is this Lucien guy anyways? Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 2008-06-04 ch 2,	abuseGyah.. man this is awesome! At first I thought that was from her book- who would of know itd be this cool! It reminds me of the Holy Black series- a must read at that! Ari chan
RedWingedAngel002 2008-06-04 ch 1,	abuseOmfg the irony! they are both immortal beings and yet they never tell eachother.. understandable of course.. but argh! @_@ Question though, Kenshin is a demon and so is Kaoru. From what we've seen, Kemshin is a darker, angel-like demon, but what is Kaoru? I guess I'll have to keep on reading to see, neh? But really! I love this so f*ing much.. I love are your works! Please keep up the awesome writing! Ari chan
Sakura Crystals 2008-05-24 ch 4,	abuseYet again after all this time I get to finally reread your fic and all I want to see now is the next chapter! You last updated 9-3-06 and now its 5-24-08! Are you stuck or is there something important keeping you from finishing? I loved reading your story and I really hope you don't quite or leave it all for a really long time like so many other great stories out there. Its okay if it takes forever I'll still check on this story for years to come. Anyways don't give up please!
Ivy Tearen 2008-02-29 ch 4,	abuseUpdate Update Update! I really like this story so please update! I want more!
Sakura Kaoru-Chan 2008-01-17 ch 4,	abusesweet fic update soon
persephonesfolly 2007-12-23 ch 4,	abuseBother. Another promising story unaccountably abandoned. Why start them if you're not going to finish them? Why tease readers with a ripping good tale only to leave them hanging? Since you left off writing this one in 2006 and we're rapidly approaching 2008, I guess there's no point putting it on story alert. Such a shame too, the blending of RK characters into Celtic/Greek/Occult mythology was working out really well. I'm particularly disappointed I didn't get to find out what happened in the Proserpina subplot, for obvious reasons. You put a lot of thought into this and from your last Author's Notes it seems like you had a good idea of where to go next with the plot. What happened?
Avaritia 2007-06-24 ch 4,	abuseI Love this story. With a captital L. I Love the fact that it quotes Milton, I Love the mythology, I Love that I recognise bits here and there and that makes me feel clever, I Love the characters and the total mix up Kaoru and Kenshin have made whilst concealing their identities, I Love that Misao is an imp, I Love that Kaoru's vegetarian, I Love Avalon and well spirits and Nuada and his coolness. I Love. Muchly.
Drunken Little Monkey 2007-04-21 ch 4,	abusewonderful story! update pls!
mynewname 2007-04-05 ch 4,	abuseI will fully admit that I am rather creepily stalking my way through your stories. What can I say? I can't help it. I'm trying to avoid all that "homework" my proffs give me. It is great to see how your voice has changed over the years as it becomes more developed. Also, despite the number of stories you write they are all unique, and do not following one set pattern. I can't wait until you update so I can find out what happens next!
piwqefjk 2007-03-01 ch 4,	abuseI love this story. The way you've created lots of different supernatural species and their interactions (or lack of) works really well. I can't wait for an updae, to fnd out more xD
Tori-chan 2007-01-16 ch 4, anon.	abuseI must admit, you've got me addicted. Please, please update your story soon. If you've got writer's block, though, I understand. You have a lot of talent in this area, and I encourage you to keep writing. Seriously, this story is well written, and has none of the errors I usually find, such as problems with past and present tense. By the way, if you don't mind my asking, how old are you? I'd like to keep in touch with you. My screen name on this site is Natsu Himura, and if you can, please contact me. Thanks, and good work!

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