Ah, what a pity! You were at the peak of suspense! Please update soon =)

You are a very talented writer, this story is a perfect mix of authentic RK characters with your own very distinct flair shining through. I love the way you are mixing in all different sorts of mythology, and the way you portray daemons, fey, and even imps. I wish I could tell you something you need to improve, but I am at a loss. This is one of the best fictions I have read in a very very long time and I look forward to the next chapter. Till then.

wow i loved this story. i hope you continue it. i like the german well spirit, she's awsome ^_^ i really like the realm you set this in. very well put together

Aah, this is a very interesting story. Well written as expected from you! I hope this is continued someday!

Update! Dx Oh goodness, I just read this today and I'm in love with the whole story and there are so many mysteries... you must update!

Faerie folk and imps and demons, the perfect fantasy sort of mix to spark an interest of a fantasy reader like me. =) I love how she quotes her favorite author so much and so well suited to situations.

Please update soon!

wow..wowwowowow

I really hope you would finish it. Its gorgeous.

And wow again

As ever, this is a delight - I always like reading your Kaoru, in all her incarnations, and you are always especially good at the art of the slow reveal… something which is very evident here.

I am also enjoying your use of Celtic mythology: it's nice to see some familiar (if unexpected) names and creatures cropping up, and the way you are working with them is very interesting.

Poor Kenshin…and poor Kaoru too. It looks like they have a long way to go yet before things start to untangle themselves…

I wait and hope for more, but thank you for what you've written – yours is some of my favourite RK fiction.

~Gyre

I was overwhelmed by the gratification of just reading this...it was absolutely *breath-taking*. As corny as it may sound, I'm still having difficulty breathing as I type; my mind is doing loopty loops in the air. All this added to the fact that I can't wipe this stupid, goofy smile off my face. As I said before, this is just...too magnificent of a story to be put into exact words. I feel like nothing I say will come close to truly expressing what I feel about this fic—and what this fic deserves. Although I shall try.

This story absolutely blows me away. It’s written so brilliantly that I don’t think any words of mine can do justice in expressing how MARVELOUS this fic is. I was in sheer bliss while reading everything. Your writing structure was smooth and so fulfilling to the soul. I guess it may be because I’m a grammar freak; I absolutely can’t stand it when I see huge, gaping grammatical errors in fanfiction (especially good fanfiction). If I saw any grammatical errors in this fic, I may have just skimmed over them because they were too miniscule to account with.

I couldn’t even think properly while reading—it was as if I was being taken for a wild, thrilling ride of fantasy, and all I needed to do was lay back and close my eyes, and enjoy the ride to its fullest. Everything...Everything is written so beautifully, intricately and delicately crafted to your ways. Please, don't ever turn this story away. This piece of art is just too brilliant to ignore. It will continue to leave people in astonishment and wonder at everything this story has. The plots, characters, and of course, your will for writing. Do not turn this loveable story away. Everything you write always seems to have that magical sparkle in which others are not gifted with.

And you know, if I knew how to reach you, I would PAY you to finish this fic. I was thinking about $10-20 (American currency) per chapter, depending how long they were. This fic is too good to pass up. I've read other fantastic (but incompleted) fics before where I knew I would go crazy if I didn't read an ending, but I never felt the need to *pay* for people to finish. I know there's not much motivation for people to finish what they do (especially when it comes to fanfiction) when there isn't much to look forward to except the feeling of pride that comes when you complete a task. This fic is seriously driving me insane--to the point where I can't function properly in my daily life because my thoughts are filled with this fic, and only this fic.

Please, I beg of you, please finish this story. I don’t know what else to say except…please. Don’t give up on this.

Oh dear I really like this story!! Do you plan on continuing it>?

OMG NO! THE CHAPTER IS OVER?! You can leave it like THAT! ITs getting so interesting! T∆T

Ari chan

OMG THE CLIFFIE!! THE SUSPENCE! AH! Who is this Lucien guy anyways?

Ari chan

Gyah.. man this is awesome! At first I thought that was from her book- who would of know itd be this cool! It reminds me of the Holy Black series- a must read at that!

Ari chan

Omfg the irony! they are both immortal beings and yet they never tell eachother.. understandable of course.. but argh! @_@ Question though, Kenshin is a demon and so is Kaoru. From what we've seen, Kemshin is a darker, angel-like demon, but what is Kaoru? I guess I'll have to keep on reading to see, neh? But really! I love this so f*ing much.. I love are your works! Please keep up the awesome writing!

Ari chan

Yet again after all this time I get to finally reread your fic and all I want to see now is the next chapter! You last updated 9-3-06 and now its 5-24-08! Are you stuck or is there something important keeping you from finishing? I loved reading your story and I really hope you don't quite or leave it all for a really long time like so many other great stories out there. Its okay if it takes forever I'll still check on this story for years to come. Anyways don't give up please!

Update Update Update!
I really like this story so please update!
I want more!