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Wow. Fanfictions like this certainly are rare. I cannot even begin to possibly describe well-written this is. It's beautiful; breathtaking, even. I love it. Nice job.

A break from the usual, is it not? *Ads to favorites*

Whatever Qu-ko done,no spelling errors,far as I can tell,and an all- around awesome fic.(You great fluff writers are really swaying me to like ,fluff,not any of that sappy or extreme waiting for more...P.S.-PIDGE SAYS HI!Pidge-san

kinda STUPID

Amazing! You use the already established relationships of the characters to build up the plot and then bring the story to a satisfying conclusion. Stay gold:)

um

and pple say my chapters r short! anyway, not enough fluff for my taste, but who am i?

OK!

That's pretty good. Short and sweet.

Really caught me up in the moment there. Quality not Quantity, and that was definitely quality.

Aw, really sweet. You did a Great job, keep up the awesome work

good litle fic

nice... i like it!

*sigh* Short, but sweet. Good job w/Japanese names too.

Appeals heavily to the senses, which is definitely a refreshing switch from normal GX fanfiction.

Yay! Juudai/Asuka!

Me likey. Definite favorite.