Excellent writing and great story !

great story

An Excellent Trilogy, I quite enjoyed how Rory helped Max decide who she was and how she realised she was just miserable with what she was doing. You have a flair for darker stories and while it doesn't earn you many positive reviews, you're easily in my top ten list for DA Fic Writers:)

wow,wow and wow i h ave sat here for five hours and i have read every chapter in the 'justice' files.

whens your book out, can i have your autograph and please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please,please, will you do another chapter to conclude this amazing series.

if dark angel ever returns for a third series i know whose writing those scripts.

any way going off to read the rest of your writings and i can barely contain my excitement!

dont listen to those who criticise your writing they have got there head firmly stuck up an oreface or two!

lol

and no! time in a bottle was not soppy!

This has been an awesome experience. I've just finished reading the whole trilogy and I am so impressed. How could I have missed your stories before? You have put a lot of thought and considerable talent into them.

I'm sorry you had to kill off Rory. He was a fascinating character and I looked forward to seeing him again. Ah, well. I enjoyed your characterization of Logan too, and I really felt for him. He had to wrestle with his feelings for Max versus his sense of honor and justice.

My only criticism is a grammatical one: the use of "that" instead of "who" when referring to a person. I found it distracting.

Otherwise, a terrific trilogy.

I just finished reading your long trilogy and liked it so very much I was compelled to tell you.

Even tho Max is my favorite X-5, and Rory is a character I liked a lot, somehow Logan appealed to me the most. I found myself looking for him in every chapter. He was so much in character you deserve a bag of cookies.

I stopped reading fan fic early this year because it appeared that Alec brought out all the little girls to write a fic, that had no bearing on Dark Angel, and then named their characters Max, Logan, Alec and whoever. It was a turn off.

After Freak Nation, I started to go back to the beginning and read stories that originated in season one. Now I'm happy again. I've learned of a few good fic writers that stick to the premise, so I'll stick with them.

I'm not really a shipper, but don't like Max with Alec romantically or sexually because the series didn't show it. Max and Logan finally make sense to me for three reasons. (1) how season two was ruined by trying to break up M/L, (2) Freak Nation and (3) this story and your writing.

You have brought a semblance of happiness back to me as I'm been missing DA so much.

Thank you for your excellence writing.

I like the setting for the big fight. I grew up in the Sound and I have seen that building. The largest building in the world without pillars in the support structure. Makes buses look like matchbox cars. Great ending. I didn't want to see Rory die but it helped make the story. I hope you write another story on this story line.

Great finish. But did Rory really have to die? It's so sad. I sense a sequel though...perhaps we'll se some more of the Spider?

This story, and the series, are both fantastic. You have a good mix of action sequences and interpersonal interactions. Keep up the good work!

This was already good and its only getting better. I hop ethings work out for everyone in the end. I'm really interested in the next chapter. Can't wait.

Good stuff, I liked the work with Max thinking about the warehouse and what she had done and how she couldn't go back for help, I can't wait to see your next chapter:)

wow.. i absolutley love this story... it is so well thought out and exciting to read. your action sequences are up there with the best of them, and i love the 3-dimensional characters you have introduced. keep up the great work!

Ouch. I was hurting with everyone as they got hurt. Nice touch calling Max Justice instead of Max after a certain part. She truly has turned a corner. I hope that she can still pull herself out.

This chapter is great :) Writing from Rory's POV and the line about him being Honor... Good stuff.

Wow. I love this series.

I was reading fanfic off the DarkAngel site, followed an author that I liked, & one of her fave authors was you. I can see why: great plots, good character development in the even bit players, and a nitpicker's dream: someone who actually put effort into grammar and spelling.

I'm a little disappointed though, that this is only going to be a trilogy. I can hardly wait to see how you develop a kinder, gentler "Justice", (if that's the direction you're taking) and seeing what direction Max takes from there: whether she backslides from time to time, or if she truly leaves vigalantism completely behind her, or what. I love your Rory character; he's someone that could probably be explored further as well. Like maybe a recurring character who drops in cryptically from time to time, revealing more of himself in little driblets every once in a while?

Please keep writing!