hmm..i like it..but im confused lol.. perhaps a little insight?

:)

Loving this... Go NICK! I am so loving your stories...

Don't know how I missed this one before - great one shot!

Oh, hey now! You left me with all this anticipation, and then all I get for my troubles is "FIN"? What, is this some cruel homage to the frustration of French romance? Is this the short version of "A Very Long Engagement"?!

I feel so denied! lol

And my mind has a thousand ideas about that one rule... ;)

Good fic.
~Jackie~

Nice one shot. Like the way you use to explore some little scenes...Write more, please. What do you think about a multi chap? With N/S of course...

Because this was short, and I read fast, I had the whole thing finished in about thirty seconds, but I went back and read it over and over again a bunch of times before I hit that little blue button, because this fic was just gorgeous. Seriously, honey, I don't know how you do it. I completely adored this in too many ways to even mention. But, alas, I will try.

I loved how Sara was swinging on the chair that wasn't meant to be swung on. That's just so her.

I loved how Sara knew that Nick would catch her if she fell, and how he liked knowing that.

I loved the "driving him crazy, in more than one way" thing. Double meanings are always such a big part of what you write, and I just adore it.

I love how you write them so perfectly. You have the dialogue so spot-on, just like it is on the show. It's so short and snappy and concise and meaningful. Just like Nicky and Sara are. :)

Amazing. You're the best.

Good story.

Aww they are SO cute and you could SO continue that. Lol I lvoe storys where you completely forget the point but they always end up being cute!

Aww...short and cute, the perfect pick me up!

TNC

This was lovely, as always. I really enjoyed it.

Maybe it's 'cos it's 2 in the afternoon and I just got out of bed and am half asleep and missed something...but what was the one rule?

Ah well...it was good. You write them together nicely :o)

Oh I spent way too much time with my friends last year...making my innocent mind so bad :b

Very nice, though a bit vague