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| JennCorinthos 2006-10-19 ch 1, | abuseLoving this... Go NICK! I am so loving your stories... |
| M2S 2006-04-03 ch 1, | abuseDon't know how I missed this one before - great one shot! |
| A Christy 2006-01-01 ch 1, | abuseOh, hey now! You left me with all this anticipation, and then all I get for my troubles is "FIN"? What, is this some cruel homage to the frustration of French romance? Is this the short version of "A Very Long Engagement"?! I feel so denied! lol And my mind has a thousand ideas about that one rule... ;) |
| CSIFan4Life 2005-12-23 ch 1, | abuseGood fic. ~Jackie~ |
| Mma63 2005-12-16 ch 1, | abuseNice one shot. Like the way you use to explore some little scenes...Write more, please. What do you think about a multi chap? With N/S of course... |
| I want George 2005-12-16 ch 1, | abuseBecause this was short, and I read fast, I had the whole thing finished in about thirty seconds, but I went back and read it over and over again a bunch of times before I hit that little blue button, because this fic was just gorgeous. Seriously, honey, I don't know how you do it. I completely adored this in too many ways to even mention. But, alas, I will try. I loved how Sara was swinging on the chair that wasn't meant to be swung on. That's just so her. I loved how Sara knew that Nick would catch her if she fell, and how he liked knowing that. I loved the "driving him crazy, in more than one way" thing. Double meanings are always such a big part of what you write, and I just adore it. I love how you write them so perfectly. You have the dialogue so spot-on, just like it is on the show. It's so short and snappy and concise and meaningful. Just like Nicky and Sara are. :) Amazing. You're the best. |
| Space-Case7029 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuseGood story. |
| LaydeeBear 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuseAww they are SO cute and you could SO continue that. Lol I lvoe storys where you completely forget the point but they always end up being cute! |
| The Notorious Cat 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuseAww...short and cute, the perfect pick me up! TNC |
| Astralis 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuseThis was lovely, as always. I really enjoyed it. |
| bcdcdcd 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuseMaybe it's 'cos it's 2 in the afternoon and I just got out of bed and am half asleep and missed something...but what was the one rule? Ah well...it was good. You write them together nicely :o) |
| Vengeful 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuseOh I spent way too much time with my friends last year...making my innocent mind so bad :b Very nice, though a bit vague |