God, you've done it to me again. I get so INTO a story you've started, but have yet to complete. Had you planned on using Quistis' skills as a blue mage in your fic? GR! An update would be great, but I'll not hold my breath.

Once again, you've created this amazing story and drawn me and only for me to see that you haven't updated in forever. I do hope that you'll come back to this story and finish it!

...such an awesome fanfic and you just stopped writing it...I hate authors that do that...

The chapter before this when Edea Hinted that I knew it right away because Quistis is the Second best magic user in the game (Out of the main usable characters, If you count edea she's the third)

Hehe. This story is turning out very well. I love how you have Seifer interacting and taking classes from the others. Adds more depth to the story. Mag-Poisoning is a very interesting tihng you used. I hope you will update soon. =3

Very well written. You've really captured Seifer's attitude.

Hope to see more soon.

Yeay! Please update soon!

I must say, it's been a while since a fic has grabbed my attention as strongly as yours has and for that I applaud you. The only flaw I can see is that the story has yet to be complete.

*Whistles* Yay!!
I love this fic... I really love the way you made Seifer...
Please keep up the good work.. I can't wait for your next update *Waves banner* Banner says "Your Great"
:)

I have to say that this is perhaps the most well-written and amazingly compelling fan fiction I've ever read in any genre, about any characters. Luckily, it also happens to be in my favorite genre, and about my favorite characters. I think that if this story goes unfinished, I will cry. Please finish it. Please?

Again, I find myself in complete adoration of this chapter. It's amazing and I love it.

I'm so glad that you've continued writing, I honestly do think you are a very talented author. ^_^

Please keep the updates coming!

Your faithful reader,

~.:The Princess of Chaos:.~

Homg!! This story is rocking. I love those tense moments where they are so close to something 'wink-wink' when and interuption occurs. It really makes me want to continue on with my story, please contineu soon, it's an inspiration to myself! Great job.

P.S. I'd just thought I'd mention that technically Edea lost her powers when she transfered them to Rinoa in the game. But in this story it works so umm yeah... just thought I'd let you know. :)

This is a wonderful story! I'm really surprised at the lack of reviews. I almost feel like I should apologize for not reading it sooner. I absolutely love how you portray Seifer and Quistis so accurately; it makes the plot one of the few plausible ones out there. Please continue to update and I will continue to review!

C.L.

I was happy to get the email alert about your new chapter. I do like your use of the mag-poisoning. It was a fantastic creation from altol and you've used it well. I look forward to see how you will develop this sorceress and knight relationship between Quistis and Seifer. I love the little detail about how she is bothered by the sorceress mark on his chest without knowing why.

You're doing a fantastic job and I look foward to future chapters!

update please