o, i wanna read what happens next!

This story is rather interesting. I look foward to getting further into it. Please update soon.

*staring at screen in complete interest* O_O

Woah, that was purely excellent! It was like reading the prologue of a real novel! Gosh! I really liked it! I'm anxious to find out what happens next. Please update whenever you can. I am seriously putting you on my favorite stories/authors list.

Nice novelization of the movie's plot. I suggest you write a more ellaborated version of the movie's ending, for example, you could give Abby, Foxy and Goosey bigger roles.

Keep it up!