It was good of her to apologise, it seems to have brought her peace

Congratulations :)

Nicely done. A very plausible alternative to the story originally told.

Brilliant story! it had me laughing and crying all the way through! i would frequently speak out when i have been reading this only to realize what i have done. it has been most enjoyable and you, my friend, have a huge talent for writing. I hope you enjoyed writing this story as my as i have enjoyed reading it. the whole love story was very well written and believable to the last word. very sweet and clever i have found it! thank you again for such wonderment! i really don't know who else to say! i have found this story so good i feel that a shirt review would not do it justice yet i know that no matter how much i write i shall still be unsatisfied with the length. I think after reading this i am in just as much danger of being in love with pride and prejudice as ever! I have hardly been able to put it down from want of wanting to know what happens next! Anyway, i must leave but i would like to say thank you again for the time and effort put into this fantastic story!

This was an incredible sad tale, but happy it ended well.

Solid story! You delivered well. Only criticism, throughout, is avoiding run-on sentences. You have a tendency to meld several sentences together inappropriately with commas; which can sometimes be attractive as a stylistic thing and to achieve a better flow as a stream of consciousness from the narrator, but in your case it tended to only hinder. Several times I had to pause and reread sentences several times over to clarify their intended meaning.

A wonderful tale

A wonderful tale

Jeez, I loved it!

Congratulations! Your fanfic is just amazing!

xoxo

Yowsa! This was the dozie of a chapter. I feel a little numb for Lizzy. She has hurt everyone, and all completely unintentionally. How is this going to work out with Darcy?

Wow, this is getting intense...so, the wife has given Darcy permission to sleep around, she won't sleep with him, and now they have kissed. This is getting good (and soo bad at the same time!)

I am so happy that I don't have to wait for upcoming chapters.

what amazing developements. Darcy talked to Bingley, Bingley is engaged to Jane, Darcy kissed Lizzy's hand...wait, what? Gosh I have such mixed feelings, and I can only imagine how badly Darcy hurts having Elizabeth in his house, the poor man is going to crack soon...especially when Lizzy becomes seriously persued...in my opinion. but why did he marry Arabella in the first place, I cannot read fast enough to quell my curiosity.

wqow, so Wickham and Darcy were brothers here, what a cool turn of events. I was so worried when lizzy said that all of her suitors were unwanted, that Darcy was near by...Not that he was not aware.

I must admit that I generally don't like fics written in first person, but this one is certainly an exception, I love it. I feel awful wanting Lizzy and Darcy together, he is married, granted to a horrible woman, but he is married...but I still want them together : )

Oh wow, how wonderfully awkward. Why does Mr. Darcy have to be married...and why would he have chosen such a horrible woman! I loved the library scene, how crazy that she would select the one book in which he had placed the letter. I feel so sorry for him. He is obviously still in love with her.