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| RoxxiSanders 2008-05-31 ch 1,  | abuseVery sweet and i loved Catherine's reaction to Grissom's gift, made me smil. Only criticism is that the proposal could have been a bit more emotional or whatever but yeah...good job. xxoxx |
| csiluver123 2006-10-29 ch 1, | abuseaw, that was so sweet! |
| Rai - Chan 16 2005-12-22 ch 1, | abuseWow i wasn't expecting that lol |
| Lalenna 2005-12-19 ch 1, | abuseNice oneshot. I thought it was really sweet and I did wish it was longer...I would have loved to find out what everyone had...One suggestion for future oneshots of this type would be to meantion that Greg and Sara were dating before the main focus of the plot. With this he asked her to marry him and I was like 'what?!?! You cant ask someone to marry you out of the blue like that without them even dating'...the on the next line you meantion they had been...if that was said at the begining then it would flowed better...that only my opinion, ignor it if you wish :P - Lenna |
| piepretzelngreg 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuseaw. that's so cute! |
| LadyJess 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abuseOh wow, that was a surprise!! I hope that's my xmas present this year... |
| remoob1513 2005-12-15 ch 1, | abusekinda went alittle fast but it was cute. i love the little fluffy fics. hope to read more from you. please please please PLEASE WRITE MORE? PLEASE? |