you get better soon won't you? I do ever so hope there are a veritable army of well wishers and family at your beck and call, for I'm quite sure you deserve it!
take care and all my (rather useless) simpathy,
your faithful reader

I take back what I said about the talking creatures. Your reasons ultimately arose, causing me to not mind. Besides, you handled their interactions quite well. That's the thing about your stories. All the difficulties that come with the themes you chose to input were handled magnificently. Even if one does have some qualms, they are eventually squashed. Those that are not squashed, which is very few in number, become trivial either through follow up, banishment from the story, or just the sheer amount of quality you show. The thing about authors is that they are often overenthusiastic, causing them to ruin their stories with excessive interesting things. You include far more cliches than most but still manage to combine them and deal with the difficulties successfully. Vampires, Dark Harry, planning against Dumbledore, often-childish grown men, Death Eaters' obeying of Harry, Harry's being of a prophesied ruler, Vampire clans and etc., creature blood, special abilities; the list could go on and on and I refuse to create another list of the difficulties that usually arrive with. I'm not saying that your story is perfect and I am not just trying to praise you as much as possible; that would be uncharacteristic of me and untruthful. However, I am saying that your faults are more insignificant than even some of the best of other stories I have read and that I am in a good mood and too lazy to speak of faults. Although I have to say that you really should add more details about the interaction between Harry and people who are not part of his inner group--namely when someone discovers his identity. I was kind of looking forword to Snape's reaction especially. Well, your story has been highly entertaining and I even had some fits of uncontrolable laughter--actually, a lot of fits of uncontrolable laughter. Hmm...Maybe I'm a bit too serious in this review but I hope you appreciate it. Please respond soon with something so I know that you're fine. The symptoms you described are extremely worrying and I hope that nothing too serious has befallen you. It seem like it could be anything from an extreme case of stress or fatigue to some frightening illness. Again: Respond soon.

Nothing about your story has bugged me so far. Well, until this chapter. Too many talking animals is not good. I understand the snake; the tiger is acceptable; however, this is just too much. It's irrational. Still love your story, though, and am willing to continue reading to see how it goes. Once again, update soon. If you're having reserves about how the story has been progressing, remember that you could always revise

So far from what I've read, you seem to be an excellent writer. You know just how to handle emotions and sequences of events. The vampire theme is hard to control too but this story seems neither overloaded nor childish. Can't wait to read more and please update soon since you seem to have not completed the story yet.

This story is amazing :) I hope you feel better soon!

I love your story.

I'm very sorry to hear that you are ill and hope you will get well soon. I hope its not anything too serious.

Too bad you lost interest in this fic. I've just spent the day rereading it only to find that Authors Note saying its discontinued. What an amazing fic with multiple plot threads available. Hopefully your health has improved, or at least you know what is happening. Thanks for creating an amazing world with this work.

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I'm really enjoying CoF and love your sarcasm and humour. Of all the "back in time" stories I've read (or at least read the fist chapter), your is certainly one of the most original and a great deal of fun to read. You have a wonderful balance of dialogue, action and exposition. I hope that your health has improved since your last author's note and look forward to reading more when your muse and health are both cooperating!

Good story.

hi
i really like this story, it's too bad you can't continue, because this fic has so many things that make it different from most stories and therefor extremely interesting and i really hope you find the strength back to write some more. especially because of that awfull cliffhanger-ish end. >.<

i sencerely hope you get better, and that you know whats wrong soon. i just wish you the best and that this will go away, whatever it might be.

avy

Aw, I hope you feel better sugar. Good luck overcoming whatever ails you, and know that I have thoroughly enjoyed this story. It is sad that you won't continue writing this as it is very good, but needs must, ya know? Anywho can't wait for anything else you decide to write.
lots of love
cyne

brilliant

Um, yeah. I want to go ahead and comment that the dream sequence with Ginny was fucking EPIC! "My once and never husband" I think this has been my favorite line in the whole story. Cant wait for more chapters! Well, once I read up to chapter 24.
truly
cyne

wow. this story is a trip and a half, and i love it!! can't wait to read more!