Um... I honestly don't understand this one. It's like you were going somewhere with it, and it makes sense in your mind, but from the reader's perspective... I honestly am not sure who's who - well, except Harry, of course. Also, you might want to split up your paragraphs. It really could be good, with some work. Check out pinkdigi's Green - it may help you or inspire you.

-inky.

your story is diffent but its really good i like it

how tragic. loved it tho.

Sad really Sad Harry dies. T_T

-Ann

Sad...I liked it. It was sad, but still great. Great description, and poor...Ginny? I think.

Aw... that was sad, too. But well done. It's not cheerful, but it's so powerful. You're detail and descriptions never cease to amaze me. So many fan fictions rely solely on dialogue to express emotions and such, but you have this knack for explaining things. Everything flows so well.
It was kind of akward to keep reading 'the body,' but it shed some mystery onto the situation.
So, great story. It was really well written. Interesting, too! If we were in school, I'd give you an A+, but we're not so I'll give you an 'Excellent'. Good job!

very good (ditto), you should try to space it out a bit more, it's hard to keep track of where you're reading. Anywhere it sort of brought a tear to my eye.

Very, very cool. Depressing, indeed. But...it's still good. I liked how it was referred to as "The body" instead of flat out telling you.

wow... depressing=understatement

*tears*