wow...sakura you go girl... tell those idiotic-council men how prejudice and stupid of them to betray naruto just like that!!

have these council men to fight their own battles..

pls update!!

PLEASE MORE

This story looks very good, please update. These are my favourite kind of Naruto storys.

look, what i have to say to you...

GET OFF YOUR LAZY ** AND START TYPING! UNLESS YOUVE ENCOUNTERED A SEVERE ACCIDENT, YOU HAVE NO EXCUSE!! NOW GET TO WORK, YOU LAZY **!

Must have another chapter... ^^

Enma was the monkey king that the third summoned.

awe some!

im saying konoha is going to fall

Yes!YEs dammit continue!!Argh!This is good dammit!!

Your grammar,spelling,punctuation,ect is great.No errors that I can see.

I love you version of Naruto.Super powerful godlike shinobi as been done before.But your Naruto isn't famous for his power,he's famous becuase he is a military Genius!!I can see a fic made intirely out of flashbacks, and still be good.

Or,if that isn't your cake, try having him fight battles and wars all over the world.Europe,asia,the middle east,siberia,everywhere.

I think it is neccisary to show the talk between Sakura and Naruto.It helps tell how he became the way he is.

Tsunade is one of his most presiuos people,but she will stay in Kohona.So he needs to spare her.

Well, Ill be back if you put up another chapter.Till then!

wow his house is awesome and dam expensive...

is tsunade going to leave or will she be spared by naruto?

Nice story. I would like it to continue, though I am somewhat pessimistic about its future, seeing that you haven't updated in nearly a year. I would like to see more of this.

-demonicnargles

I hope you can update soon,because this is perhaps one of the most well written pieces I have seen in a very long while.
Keep up the good work.

Just a thought,where you going on a gothic Lord of the Rings theme?If I was reading it right it made me feel like I would in a high castle of Gondor(I think is the name?)

thanks,
blue_inu

damn saukra tell them off they way she did it was hott i am good lord those men must have ** their pants

great story, and a nice version of naru.