“For what it’s worth, I think it’s cute,” Peter piped up.
That is the most intelligent thing he's ever said!
LOL, luv this oneshot! I didn't believe you about the meaning of a stag and I looked it up. Holy crap, it was true. I'm gonna tell me friends about this!
LOL!

lol, that was great. It really was. I love it. Everything was perfect!

That was GREAT! I loved it! Who knew that was the real meaning of stag?!

Oh, this was good! And for change it wasn't about the Hogwarts years! :D Loved Lily's and Moony's character!
Keep up writing!

Wow! This was a fantastic one-shot! And I've got to love the 'sordid affair' that keeps coming up! XD James and Lily are so perfect together... I also love that James gets so jealous easily! :D This was hilarious! Thanks for the good read!



Sincerely,
The Awkward Turtle

omgah I don't think I can look at James the same way again. XD I love his inner thoughts, they're absolutely hilarious. He's so imaginative. I love Remus' last line...that's definitely how I'd react. XD;

that was certainly unique and well thought out. a castrated pig...really? who would've thought? and the whole remus lily affair thing, and i loved all their kid's names. mr. darcy, classic!

Callisto:

Back to complement you again. Lovely inturnal monolog. Although I am not sure how I feel about paranoid James (it makes him seem irrational and a little immature) I fully appreciate the added comedic value the imagined Moony threat offers, and the way it illustrates affection-albeit in a somewhat manic fashion. I admit I am not much for castration humor, even though I appreciate that it is instrumental to this particular piece as you have written it.

In general, this selection had me laughing out loud (or, as out loud as I could with other people in the house.) Watching the characters lose it themselves was one of the most entertaining factors. The dialouge was, for the most part, excellent, bot external conversation and internal commentary. The reactions were enjoyable-in fact, they were one of the best things about it. Oh, catchy title, too.

If I come up with any more suggestions or praise for you I will pass it on. Until then, this, too, is going on my favorites list. I'm sorry I cannot offer any more helpful hints, but I read somewhere ( Nigel Watt's, "Teach Yourself: Writing a Novel") that writers need all the encouragment they can get. So, perhaps I am doing you a service that way. (I highly recommend the book, by the way).

Thank you

Hahahahaha... Heehehehehee... kyakyakyak! I thought this story was extremely hilarious. I loved it. So funny.

that was brilliant.

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH! I love James's inner thinkings!

This was HILARIOUS!

Great one-shot. Is the a sort of sequel to 'She eats WHAT!'? It was so funny. I couldn't stop laughing. I hope none of my family can hear me giggling to myself in the middle of the night, or they might start to doubt my sanity. Great writing.

Hahaha. That was so funny. I love it. =D

Lmao, oh that was even better then 'She etas WHAT!' lol. I love this one so much. awesome job :D

ok love it