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j's 91 2008-09-16 . chapter 3
Nice story, that I only just now happened upon, but: What about the party?

(being forced to use my brain and imagine what happened is good too, I guess...)

Ch. 1
I must say, made me think of a Santa Prowl... making a list and checking it twice. Gonna find out whose n...
StarSwoop 2008-06-08 . chapter 3
Excellent!
SylverMage 2008-03-26 . chapter 3
Lovely^^ Seasonal fics are always fun. On a sidenote: Poor Red.

I'm surprised the fic never made it as far as the actual party...or at least, the aftermath. Although I can envision what that'll be like.

I also wish we could see a bit of what the Big Bot does while his troops are getting ready to bring the house--I mean, Ark down. I wonder what Optimus's festive touch would be like.

Nonetheless, a very enjoyable Christmas fic. I kinda hope the dye Wheeljack got splattered with was red and green, at least :P
Trapped in Reality 2008-01-02 . chapter 3
Why is this under complete? Surely, this isn't how you're going to end the story?
Vigatus 2005-12-29 . chapter 3
I would really like to hear about what Wheeljack and the Dinobots got up to with the Decpticons.
DeltaSilver88 2005-12-27 . chapter 3
'Red Alert seeing green sheep and blue kangaroos'.. that was what cracked me up. And... ouch... my head was hurting already!
TruebornChaos 2005-12-26 . chapter 3
It'll be some party. Can't wait.
Tiamat1972 2005-12-26 . chapter 3
Poor Red! He has to relax whether he wants to or not. Guess this is one "prank" that Prowl will "overlook."

"Though despite all the complaints about the greenery, strangely enough not many people seemed to complain when it was Carly who got caught under the mistletoe with them."

Guess Spike would be the only one complaining, and only when HE wasn't the caught with her.

Glad to see that Wheeljack didn't forget the Decepticons on his Chistmas Wish List.

But the last line just capped it. ROTFL!! Can't wait for the update!
Roadblock 2005-12-25 . chapter 3
Jazz surveyed the Common room with a careful optic.“Lights, check. Tree, check. Decorations, check. Music, check. A grin lit up Jazz’s face and he snapped his fingers. “That’s it! And t’ think I almost forgot about th’ booze.

YAY..! *Roadblock goes to barty whith Jazz, Ratchet, Prowl, Bluestreak and twins* MERRY CHRISTMAS..!
Straya 2005-12-25 . chapter 3
*cackles* Ah, this is so great. I just love all the ups and downs of the holiday where the 'bots are involved. XD Somehow, I can SO see Ironhide burning a box of mistletoe and grumbling about it the WHOLE time. LOL And poor Red Alert! OY! Well...one way to get the poor guy to finally take a break, I guess? *snickers*
HunterBlues 2005-12-24 . chapter 3
Looks like someone was partying a tad early, eh Red? That's even funnier when you consider it was said Red who opposed the partying and any of the accompanying "refreshments". Can't wait for the party to start. Wonder who the unlucky Bot is who annoyed Prowl one to many times?
HunterBlues 2005-12-24 . chapter 2
Wheeljack caused something to explode? Surprise, Surprise... :) I'm thinking that someone else should string up the lights besides the Twins.
HunterBlues 2005-12-24 . chapter 1
Um... Reads like a summary, so this should be an interesting fic. Although I've got my own ideas who *I'd* put under the mistletoe. ;)
shadow dragon04 2005-12-24 . chapter 3
this is getting good can't wait for the next chapter soon please

Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year
Vigatus 2005-12-20 . chapter 2
I think this is going to be an amusing story. I hope you continue it. i espically would like to see the Dinobots negotiate the return of Wheeljack's and Ratchet's eqquipment and then leave the victim I mean the costomer with a reminder, in the form of a mild beating as oppose to a sever beating. It would also be great to hear Grimlock argue with Optimus Prime, Grimlock would ignore Prowl, over the definition of a mild beating and a sever beating.
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