 Madara's Crystal 2009-02-18 . chapter 1I loved this one, it really connected to both Kakashi (awesomeness) and the reader. It was brilliant. |
 SongoftheDarquePhoenix 2007-08-03 . chapter 1This is absolutly amazing. You've captured the darker essence of Kakashi so well. Grim, and determined. |
 CherryBlossoms38 2007-08-03 . chapter 1That was really cool. I never thought of Kakashi that way before... Anyway, excellent story! |
 Just One 2007-03-11 . chapter 1I believe I have reviewed this piece already once, back when I hadn't made myself an FF account yet. But just the other day I came around this again and I felt obliged to add on another review, a signed one this time, partially because I feel like it and partially because though I don't mind receiving anonymous reviews, I hate being the one leaving them. It feels unpersonal. So here you are, a nice signed review by me!
I love this piece. I love the way how you can write potential metaphores, and also write them the way that we can spot them dancing inbetween the lines as well. I live for potential metaphores.
I adore the comparision. I actually spent ten minutes comparing each line from the crow paragraphs to the corresponding line from the Kakashi paragraphs. It's worked out perfectly.
There were hardly any typos, that's always a plus.
And! You did an excellent job on capturing the character of Kakashi right there. I find him hard to write, but it's like it doesnt even cost you any trouble. You can just imagine the whole thing and somehow it really just fits. Great job.
-xx- Nika-chan |
 Kyoshi Slickfish 2006-01-06 . chapter 1ugh...gory descriptions in this one. s'ok, the story is a great analogy and explains his name very well. very jealous of your talent. =)
update soon! |
 wildcatt 2006-01-03 . chapter 1Ah, I seem to have missed this piece. Anyhow...interesting concept. Kakashi's name means scarecrow, yeh? You always manage to surprise me somehow...I thought you were going to go angsty all the way to the end...but then you add in one last short paragraph with a little bit of hope (at least, I saw it that way...) Vivid descriptions...the Kakashi's death part made me wince. Original work ^_^ |
 paralleltodarkness 2005-12-21 . chapter 1WHOA.
Introspective it is. You've certainly taken a different side on the whole Kakashi ordeal. Very unique and inspiring.
Keep on writing!
--p>dark |
 Neko 2005-12-16 . chapter 1 Ha that's relly good I like it the comparsons are relly not all that bad keep it up writhe some more for the other chaters plecae |
 moonlit reveries 2005-12-16 . chapter 1its so nice! I love it! |
 PimpTroyce 2005-12-15 . chapter 1Beautiful, amazing really, I'm awed by this. Truly I am, such depth and understanding, such a fresh new perspective, not like all the old theories. I’m in love with it, with you for writing this. I hope you continue to write on any type of kakashi stories for surely, they will be wonderful. I'll be looking out for them, love. =) |
 een nihc 2005-12-15 . chapter 1i like the way u compare scarecrow n kakashi.nicely written! |
 blackraven23 2005-12-15 . chapter 1i really like it! its very true to what kakashi is and different from what everyone else portrays him to be..
if only everyone could write like you.. T_T oh well, i suppose ill just survive by this! ;) bai! |