wow Hiashi seems all,but in this story he reminds me og gil grissom and that guy his rival eckly hiashis like a mixture of the two csi guys. great job.hanabi and hiashis thoughts cracked me up

Such an awesome story... I wonder if they ever find out who did it. If you need an idea for another mystery fanfiction, Naruto Monk style is the way to go. ^^ Love the story

Interesting story you have going on here. Keep up the good writing I"m interested in how this is resolved

Great story, though it hasn't been updated for so long. Please update soon.

You BETTER UPDATE THIS SOON! I like the CSI Twist in it.

Wow! That took you a long time to update (but no worries, I still love reading it!) So, Update!

Great fic! Hanabi isn't developed in canon very much, so it's interesting to see how she's differed from Hinata - she's quite assertive, isn't she? ^_^

I love CSI, and I love the Hyuugas, so this gets a thumbs up from me. Update soon, etc.

Interesting twist. I liked it. Update Update Update.

This is great and funny!CSI sytle!write more soon.

Ok, so I was looking for a great story and I happened on this one. I read it and decided that you better update. I know it's been a month since your last update, but, you have a good premise. I like the continuity of the story. The paragraphs have good structure and it is kind of sadistic to see what goes on with Hanabi's training. I like your insight into the characters and you nailed them. Good job. OH, I also checked out your profile, yes, I am wordy, but I agree with you views on Kakashi. But anyway, even if you hadn't seen a full episode of CSI, I guarantee your forensics education is much more realistic. I would rather read an educated story and your's was intriquing. OK I will quit now. :)

it was an interesting mix of humor and serious scene at the same time.quite original.keep writing.

Haha. I just finished reading your last two chapters and I am very impressed. It's so original and funny, especially the way you portray Hiashi and Habnabi. They're hilarious and kind of creepy at the same time(though your portrayals may be true...*coughs*). Update soon, please!

Wow! Interesting story! =D
I like it!

interesting. a little too csi perhaps, because I don't think ninja villages are quite this investigative.