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| stargate butterfly 2008-02-18 ch 4,  | abusehi loved the story. found it a little hard to follow but it kept me reading. what do you mean to much blood, never. i would like to see reaction to her dyeing and how, why did she kill jack. maybe a little clarity to the story?. loved the use of evenscense though. xox |
| SGS1-POTC 2007-10-28 ch 4, | abuseThis is So good. It's good too see a difference in story plots. I really wish you would continue this. It's very good. |
| Ko nan ChakaZo. 2007-04-18 ch 1, | abuseForgot to add this to my favs... ^_^ Still great! Good job... again! |
| Myn McLoony 2007-03-24 ch 4, anon. | abuseWow, that was hard to read... very dark. I liked it. Was there too much stabbing and blood? That's a matter of opinion, of course, but I didn't think so. :) What I didn't quite like was the ending... not because I wanted it happy, but because I would've liked to see Daniel's reaction. Not to mention we don't know why she killed Jack or how she killed herself... or at least I don't. Sequel, perhaps? Please? :D |
| stusue 2007-03-10 ch 4, | abuseI really liked the convoluted style and I love angst! :o) Unfortunately, however, I like happy endings and I didn't really like reading about Sam going mad and killing people, then herself; I much prefer Sam and Jack eventually getting together at the end. So, call me a sap, if you will! But why did she go mad and why did she kill Jack? Just wondering as I'm not sure to which episode you referred ... I never remember what the episodes are called. :o) |
| VisualIDentificationZeta 2007-01-19 ch 3, | abuseas I said before, you have a good style, great composition of sentences, but unfortunately this fic is just too dark for me. I really don't like to read tragedy and especially not character death cause they depress me and I read fic to relax, take a load off, have a reason to laugh and sink into the waves of fluff and sappiness and ship. My life is too stressful as it is, don't want to make it even more so by upsetting myself needlessly by reading about death and killing and mental illnesses. |
| VisualIDentificationZeta 2007-01-19 ch 4, | abuseyou're a great writer, please keep it up. |
| KeiKo 2005-12-20 ch 1, anon. | abusevery dark... is there more? it seems very short. i like it to go longer, find out how she died? |